Question

New rap

Answer 1

Rapping pro: (Verse 1):

Im a rapping pro my rhymes will make you cry like a baby your outta frying pan now and into the fire, you’ll get burnt my skills will leave you throwing a fit.

Once I get on a roll start panicking I turn into a rapping manic, my rhymes become diabolical its advisable you just give up.

You sound like Justin beiber with rhymes when I finish you it will be a gaytality your not the rap God you’re a stupid sod who pretends to play him your embarrassing yourself.

(Chrous x2): You better watch your back im coming for you ill destroy you this is a rap battle, im a fighter ill go all night, all 24 rounds without giving prepare for a challenge your in for rough time.

So you think you’re the best of the best then im gonna put you to the test of tests, when it comes to rap battling im pumped chump so don’t give me no excuses and blame your keyboard when you make mistakes.

Like Sub zero with insults ill freeze you in your place with fear causing you to stutter with every single rhyme.

Im a lyrical assassin that’s why Rapping is my specialty you’re just another one of my casualties, my rapping is my lethality, my brutality and your fatality ill never use your private life or family against you its not my mentality.

(Chrous x4): You better watch your back im coming for you ill destroy you this is a rap battle, im a fighter ill go all night, all 24 rounds without giving prepare for a challenge your in for a rough time .

Answer 2

it really good dull

Answer 3

Btw dont just leave a medal please leave feedback

Answer 4

Helps me improve my raps

Answer 5

would you care for a very honest opinion

Answer 6

Sure

Answer 7

the transitions from each rhyme just do not fit its kinda dull it kinda looks like you took 5 min to slap this thing together its getting there i hope you keep doing this because i do see potential in this

Answer 8

Lol thanks for the opinion eh its may not be my best ill improve though

Answer 9

you did improve from the last one

Answer 10

yea bro do stop i have been writing music and composing pieces for about 6 years now so if you ever need help i got you

Answer 11

Thanks

Answer 12

no problem :P

Answer 13

Awesome rap dude. Record it on youtube (:

Answer 14

AWESOME RAPPING! \(\Huge\color{green}{I~Love~it~SOOOO~much!!!}\) You should post on youtube!

Answer 15

@ElizabethS @HelpBlahBlahBlah @Squirrels! Come read his rap it ROCK!

Answer 16

epic rap homey r u on america got tallent

Answer 17

Nope

Answer 18

you should be! :)

Answer 19

I might go

Answer 20

Link to my new rap http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/535fe494e4b08d41350e3838

Answer 21

YA! I would TOTALLY watch you!