Question

Plz help ill give a medal.


The passage below can be revised to make it more concise. Which word is a modifier that can be eliminated because it adds no meaning?

Dr. Madison is somewhat skeptical about stories of global warming. She has gathered scientific data in remote areas to prove her position.

Answer 1

Plz help

Answer 2

@winry can you help me plz

Answer 3

@wifibasedgod

Answer 4

@dinmosiaren

Answer 5

@Destinymasha
@David....

Answer 6

@Biokiiller396

Answer 7

I think somewhat can be taken away cause it modifies skeptical and either way he is skeptical so ya know... That's what I think

Answer 8

OK thanks can you help me with these other four plz btw ill give you your medal.

Answer 9

I could try

Answer 10

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

Historical buildings in the small Kansas town were completely destroyed by the unexpected storm.

Which word may be eliminated to remove redundancy?

Historical

Small

Completely

Unexpected

Question 3 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.

The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.

If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Question 4 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the following passage and answer the question that follows:

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school. Ashton plans on studying drama in college.

Which choice best combines the sentences to eliminate repeated words while maintaining the meaning?

Ashton enjoyed high school and plans on studying drama in college.

Ashton enjoyed drama in high school and plans on studying it in college.

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school and plans on studying in college.

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school and plans on studying drama in college.

Question 5 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.

It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer 11

ok thanks i am so sorry friend

Answer 12

how can i repay you

Answer 13

You there

Answer 14

Completely cause destroyed well is already complete practically as for #3 I'm not sure #4 it is the second sentence and #5 I'm not sure sorry.... I'll keep trying to figure it out and all I ask is that you try to pass that will be the way of repayment X3

Answer 15

thinks

Answer 16

can you try to gues them what you think there are answer choices

Answer 17

thanks

Answer 18

Ok #3 I keep thinking the last sentence the with a prediction one and #5 I think either a or b but I'm not so sure on that one I'm thinking b cause usually if a room is windowless it is going to be dark

Answer 19

@e