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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can anyone read my Wattpad story it's an original "novel" by me I need feed back! It's not finished

OpenStudy (anonymous):

http://www.wattpad.com/story/14294944-all-over-again

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The dialogue needs to be put in new lines li0ke: "Hi," said Charles. "Wassup man," said Mike

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Also indent new paragraphs.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you! I starting writing it like that but it looked like a fanfic or the way a journal is written but know that I know it's supposed to look like that I'll fix it!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

glad i could help

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Anything else that should be fixed?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Also I don't know if you noticed but I have another book that has more chapters if you have anytime I would love feed back on that one too!

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