Question

Can anyone read my Wattpad story it's an original "novel" by me I need feed back! It's not finished

Answer 1

http://www.wattpad.com/story/14294944-all-over-again

Answer 2

The dialogue needs to be put in new lines li0ke:

"Hi," said Charles.
"Wassup man," said Mike

Answer 3

Also indent new paragraphs.

Answer 4

Thank you! I starting writing it like that but it looked like a fanfic or the way a journal is written but know that I know it's supposed to look like that I'll fix it!

Answer 5

glad i could help

Answer 6

Anything else that should be fixed?

Answer 7

Also I don't know if you noticed but I have another book that has more chapters if you have anytime I would love feed back on that one too!