Question

I have to use the future tense to write about what I am going to do this summer and I need at least 4 complete Spanish sentences.
This is what I have:
"Una de las cosas que voy a hacer este verano es conseguir un trabajo. También voy a tratar de entrenamiento. Otra cosa que se puede hacer es tratar de unirse a un equipo deportivo. También me gustaría ir a unas largas vacaciones."
Can anybody check it for me and let me know if it is in correct future tense or if it even makes sense?Thanks :)

Answer 1

@kewlgeek555 @esshotwired @gelidium @mathstudent55

Answer 2

OK

Answer 3

first sentence is perfect

Answer 4

what do you mean with "Voy a tratar de entretenimiento"?

Answer 5

i meant ""voy i tratar entrenimiento"

Answer 6

like what sport? because you could say is Voy a tratar el entrenimiento de soccer "or"football"

Answer 7

@bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb are you there?

Answer 8

yes

Answer 9

I mean "I am going to try to workout"

Answer 10

Sorry about that @YOLO_KING

Answer 11

oh ok

Answer 12

is that correct?

Answer 13

no in spanish there isnt a word for work out you need to say "excersice" becuase entrenimiento sounds like your saying that your training

Answer 14

Okay, so could I write, "También voy a tratar de hacer ejercicio."

Answer 15

yes:D

Answer 16

Is it all in correct future tense?

Answer 17

yep

Answer 18

ok thrid sentence u need to change "unirse" to "unirme"

Answer 19

Okay

Answer 20

Anything else in the third sentence?

Answer 21

Ehh it sounds little wierd this is what i would put "Otra cosa que me gustaria ser es unirme a un equipo deportivo"

Answer 22

i would recomment that you used that sentence^^^^^^

Answer 23

Will do, thanks :)

Answer 24

What about the last sentence?

Answer 25

for the last sentence replace "ir a" with tomar so it says"Tambien me gustaria tomar unas largas Vacaciones"

Answer 26

so would that be all?

Answer 27

I'm fixing my paragraph atm

Answer 28

So would these be the final version of it?

"Una de las cosas que voy a hacer este verano es conseguir un trabajo. También voy a tratar de hacer ejercicio. Otra cosa que me gustaria ser es unirme a un equipo deportivo. También me gustaría tomar unas largas vacaciones."

All in future tense

Answer 29

@YOLO_KING ?

Answer 30

You still here @YOLO_KING ?

Answer 31

sry i had to step away for a while im back though

Answer 32

YEs its perfect all future tense

Answer 33

Thanks so much :)

Answer 34

yep no problem