Question

Will give medal:


Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

A. Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.

B. Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.

C. Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.

D. This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

Answer 1

is this it?

Answer 2

yes

Answer 3

for this one, I would say D, because you do not need to say "this essay proves..."

Answer 4

oh okay thz so much! :D