Question

Am I right?


Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

A. It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.

B. It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

C. It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

D. It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer 1

@MelissaHolmes I think A

Answer 2

I think so also!

Answer 3

thx!

Answer 4

Yeah A is correct just bopin in here