Question

A song I wrote...
Hope you like it! Give some feed back, if you want.

Answer 1

If your gonna do it, then do it.
Don’t leave me wondering,
Cause I have a life to live.
You cut me, and then you cut me deeper.
Why not just force the razor in between my fingers?
Or pull the trigger…

I told you I loved you
I gave you everything
I told you I need you
Do I need to get on my knees?
And beg you to stay,
Please please stay.
You’re all I got left, and my tears are full of questions…

Do you love me?
Or should I leave
Baby, I’m giving you one last cheat.
Then I’m gonna be like snow.
Beautiful but cold.

All the sentimental moments ain’t gonna last forever…
All my lullabies are gonna be like heavy metal.
For ever promise, you gotta keep it.
For ever concert, there’s gotta be some music.
And all the Kisses, start with ‘K’
Because it’s O.K.

But what about love?
What about us?
What about those moments?
What about Our future?

So, do you love me?
Or should I leave?
Baby, I’m giving you one last cheat.

Don’t make a scene, please don’t scream.
You made it clear…
I’ll let you be.
Just every time you think of me I hope you cry.
I hope you lay blinded by what you lost,
We could have had it all…

Answer 2

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Answer 3

*thumbs up* i love it mate!

Answer 4

i love it girl your really good keep it up :) :) :)

Answer 5

@hanner_B_nanner this is a good song hannah

Answer 6

Great job :)

Answer 7

I love it!!!

Answer 8

Thanks so much guys! <33

Answer 9

oh my gosh...that's deep! Lol :) It's great! Now you need to make a vid on youtube and post the link! ♥

Answer 10

omg, this was amasing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i agree! you need to post a video on youtube

Answer 11

the lyrics are great but how does it sounds like?

Answer 12

@Chibi_Robo3
a lil something like Michael Buble would doo

Answer 13

omg it was awesome

Answer 14

oh sounds interesting ^_^