Question

This is my poem. I put it on wattpad so it is copywrited. Please let me know what you think. My username on wattpad is PositivelyDyslexic so follow me vote or comment. Thank you and i hope you enjoy

Answer 1

Words I dread and yet I said

but I speak alone

unless this is scene

but I doubt you see me

just a vision of who yourself ought to be

I speak in these pavements.

My feet are glued to the floor.

And I always was ignored

but that's alright

I'm too scared to fight

and its alright

not like you cared

then again

you were just as scared

so why would you dare?

Its true to be

but you would never see the truth that layed inside of me...

I hope you know

maybe you can grow

but this is my mind

it leaks out time

depended on the rise

we will always collide

because your the emotions I attempt to hide.

but then write

and your in plain site.

But it gives me a chance

and I finally feel free

like there's something that has left inside of me

but its good

because it should

and this is not the life I agree to

so instead I wait

hoping a real person will appreciate

the life that was too late

but I will never wait

and taking this is what I do

but I will not let you ruin me too

not the emotions that hide inside of you.

Mine still aren't through.

Answer 2

ahhh outstanding one.... :-) superb poem... love it...

Answer 3

Thank you

Answer 4

is these your own words....

Answer 5

Yes they are I wrote this myself I put all my works on wattpad I'm trying to advertise myself and get more followers

Answer 6

excellent... best of luck... you have a very bright future in poetry... just go... best of luck....

Answer 7

Thank you so much for your support

Answer 8

pleasure :-)

Answer 9

I really like your poem! I'll make sure to follow you on Wattpad so I can read more of your poetry!

Answer 10

Thank you and I love your username big theatre fan myself

Answer 11

You should make an account on hellopoetry.com
You'd like it there as well.

Answer 12

This is good!

Answer 13

Does it copywrite I'm just afraid someone might try to steal it.
And thank you

Answer 14

Yeah it copyrights it. Don't worry about that. It's legit. All my poetry is on there

Answer 15

Okay I will look into it thanks

Answer 16

Beautiful poem. What inspired you?

Answer 17

Ummm my inspiration we'll I write a lot of poems I have over 150 poems on wattpad and I have over two hundred in my room in which I need to post. So I mixed in some of my feelings about people and my feelings about writing. I guess that's my inspiration for this one specifically. Sometimes I just write stuff and I don't even know what I'm writing and then when I'm done it perfectly explains how I feel. Also thank you

Answer 18

That is so AWESOME! I love poetry and I think it's an amazing way to express and share thoughts, feelings, memories, and dreams. I write poetry too but it's nothing compared to yours. Keep it up!

Answer 19

Thank you so much