Question

May some one please read my poem for school, and give advise.

Answer 1

Just You and I
I was alone for some time.
No one to talk to,
But you were there
Just you and I.

I was hurt,
I was in pain,
No not physical,
But it still felt the same,
But you were there
Just you and I.

I tried to stop the tears
But pain would not stop scratching on the doors of my eyes.
But you were there
Just you and I.

When I thought I would allow death to come in,
When I saw that rope to be the only way
You were there
Just you and I.

When all I needed was a friend,
You were there
Just you and I.

When my light started to shine
When I realized all I needed was you,
You were there too