Question

Im sittin here drinkin a beer
Bein lied to
Who knows the truth
He tells me im his
And its not true
F*ckem
I'm done
Peace out
Goodbye
I'm done with your lies.........................
@ayeeitsme @LovelySoldier @M.D.Saxon @Vallarylynn16 @wyatthelean96 @alyssa23

Answer 1

http://www.twiddla.com/1

Answer 2

@_Army_Strong_ Did you write this one too? :D

Answer 3

Sure Did

Answer 4

wow

Answer 5

What^^^

Answer 6

I like it, you really have a gift.

So you like poetry, try this. I seen it somewhere.

~!*The Playa*!~

He'll meet you and sweep you off your feet;
He's nice & he's funny,so cute & so sweet.
Surprisingly, he's likes the same things as you;
He does all the things that you love to do.
He's the perfect guy, the one of your dreams;
you belong together, or so it seems.
He looks in your eyes & plays w/ your hair;
He tells you that he'll always be there.
His touch is so soft, he's holds are so tight;
His words are so soothing, his kiss is just right.
You ditch all your friends for your new obsession;
You don't even realize your future is full of depression.
You think that you love him, you give him your heart;
Little do you know that he'll tear it apart.
You do what he wants, you know it's not good;
You told him to slow down, & you think he understood.
You let it slide by, he's just having fun;
You'll learn to like it as time goes by.
He's taken your heart and locked it away;
And you see him with a different girl the next day.
You cry & you grieve, but then you forgive;
He won't do it again as long as he lives.
At this point you've fallen into his trap;
He has all control when you're in his lap.
You believe he's sorry,you're together again;
You give him another chance, he's your new best friend.
You're right were he wants you, he molds you like clay;
And you see him w/ girl number 3 the next day.
He got what he wanted, accomplished his goal;
He still has your heart which he evilly stole.
He's taken you're purity, you still can't believe;
You feel hurt & cheap & extremely naive.
You know he's an retrice but you still want him back;
And you grieve about all the qualities that you lack.
All you wanted was to have some fun;
Now you wish this whole thing had never begun.
You wish that one day you'll see him cry;
That one day he'll feel what you felt when he killed you inside;
But you know that he won't; he's to numb to pain;
He'll be w/ some girl while you cry & complain.
Beware of the players, they'll steal your heart;
And they'll give it back once it's torn apart.
Don't let them suck you into their game;
Cause once you lose, you're never the same.
(cute huh? dedicated to my friend keni her x witch remain nameless)


- Keni Cooke

Answer 7

Too Much to read lmao

Answer 8

@alyssa23

Answer 9

lol It reminded me of your other poem.

Answer 10

Awwwww im sorry @_Army_Strong_

Answer 11

its okay

Answer 12

i love you taylor!!!!!!!

Answer 13

I really think your a good writer this is obviously part two or three or some part to your last one? The only critic I have to say is I would have liked to have seen more details. Get really into the visuals of how you feel. When I read your writings I want to read them imagining that it is me or how I would feel in this situation. You got skill it just need some fine tuning which I will admit mine does too. I really liked it otherwise. speak for yourself and make a picture to the world.

Answer 14

Thanks I try and I would try to write more but I hate being judged @ispike

Answer 15

I promise you I'm not judging you if that's what your thinking as for other people ignore them. I really like your writing I'm just trying to help by giving you input. I love it when people do this to me" I do not say anything I would not want to be said to me. SORRY if I offended you. And write your heart ignore others

Answer 16

herro