Question

CRASH:
Baby, I want to know where you are.
And then I look up to the sky,
Sometimes, you’re just too far.
I can always feel your eyes.

I’m not capable being on my own,
You’re the piece that’s always missing.
I can’t fix the glass, it can’t be sewn.
All I keep doing is reminiscing.

The gaps between my fingers,
Remind me where you went.
It’s a pain I feel that still lingers,
Because I still remember that drastic accident.

Darling, I know that you’re gone,
But it still hasn’t sunk in.
I can see you in one place,
And it only becomes real once I start dreamin’.

Answer 1

awh, this is very lovely and sad.
The readers would totally feel the flow of the composition.
very well done. *applauses*

Answer 2

Thank you very much <3

Answer 3

it is really really good and sad but it is good good job @lrizzi =)

Answer 4

Thank you @WinryRockbell

Answer 5

your welcome @lrizzi