Question

could anyone help me fix my personal narrative?

Answer 1

Sure thing. Do you want to attach it? or post it?

Answer 2

You there?

Answer 3

yeah

Answer 4

So what is the narrative you need help with?

Answer 5

Do you go to Connections?

Answer 6

its a personal narrative , I only have 2 pages it needs to be 3-4

Answer 7

I feel like it needs to be more descriptive

Answer 8

I'm checking it over, do you mind if I check for grammar too?

Answer 9

yes please ! Thank you!

Answer 10

I'm adding suggestions of rephrasing, they're just suggestions so don't feel any pressure to use them.

Answer 11

okidokie thankyou!

Answer 12

okay let me take a look ;)

Answer 13

thank you so much! Could you check it again after I fix it?

Answer 14

could you also erase the doc you sent me that way other people cant view my essay?

Answer 15

Sure I will do that.

Answer 16

Okay I deleted it.

Answer 17

Deleted the file from my computer too.

Answer 18

Sorry I just disappeared, the site went down.

Answer 19

mine did too! Could you check it when ive revised it?

Answer 20

of course. I'm at school and I'm switching classes soon, so if I disappear just know that's where I've gone, and I'll be back on by 11:15

Answer 21

@historygeek96

Answer 22

Hey sorry I was offline

Answer 23

I'll go over it again shortly, unfortunately I'm in the middle of my own homework right now but I'll have it done within the next two or three hours.

Answer 24

@lala2

Answer 25

Hi @historygeek96 thank so much for the revisions! Could you remember to delete it for me ? thanks so much! :)