He stole my heart, He stole my mind, He stole my every thing, He broke my mind, he broke my heart, he broke my everything
@M.D.Saxon @Whitemonsterbunny17 @Kat97 @wolfe8 @adrynicoleb @AccessDenied @arilove1d @Chevy_proud @Cydney_Morgan @Mel98 @micahpkay
waz up
Pretty good. In the second line, you say "mine." What is "mine" referring to?
I think she means *mind?
yes i fixed it and thanks:)
Yes, I think so too.
yeah she means mind dont you kate
Lol she said she changed it :P Good job Bbc :)
i think it is beautiful kate
thanks and this is the fist time i wrote a poem
It is short and simple. I also like the repetition.
it is better than the first poem i have ever wrote
hanks and i just thought of it so i decided to write it
cool
yep:)
@NaomiBell1997 @sammixboo @Compassionate @dacutiepie @Darrius @Destinymasha
I think it's fantabulous! :D Great Job, missy! *thumbs up*
thanks:)
Very welcome :3 Keep up the good work!
yw
I like it alot!!! @bbcream14 you have a wonderful talent!!! :3 So much emotion in this... Stay strong, bestie, everything will be okay!!! c:
okay thanks sis and i no it will i just have to express my pain and so i will feel beter soon and so i dont keep it in side me
thanks all of you guys for your opinion :)
YW
You're welcome!! :D And yes, never keep emotions bottled up inside.. that's the worst feeling ever. You know I'm always here for you to talk to about anything. c:
i know sis and i always do :)
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