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OpenStudy (anonymous):

He stole my heart, He stole my mind, He stole my every thing, He broke my mind, he broke my heart, he broke my everything

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@M.D.Saxon @Whitemonsterbunny17 @Kat97 @wolfe8 @adrynicoleb @AccessDenied @arilove1d @Chevy_proud @Cydney_Morgan @Mel98 @micahpkay

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

waz up

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Pretty good. In the second line, you say "mine." What is "mine" referring to?

OpenStudy (adrynicoleb):

I think she means *mind?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yes i fixed it and thanks:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yes, I think so too.

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

yeah she means mind dont you kate

OpenStudy (adrynicoleb):

Lol she said she changed it :P Good job Bbc :)

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

i think it is beautiful kate

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thanks and this is the fist time i wrote a poem

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It is short and simple. I also like the repetition.

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

it is better than the first poem i have ever wrote

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hanks and i just thought of it so i decided to write it

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

cool

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yep:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@NaomiBell1997 @sammixboo @Compassionate @dacutiepie @Darrius @Destinymasha

OpenStudy (destinymasha):

I think it's fantabulous! :D Great Job, missy! *thumbs up*

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thanks:)

OpenStudy (destinymasha):

Very welcome :3 Keep up the good work!

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

yw

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I like it alot!!! @bbcream14 you have a wonderful talent!!! :3 So much emotion in this... Stay strong, bestie, everything will be okay!!! c:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay thanks sis and i no it will i just have to express my pain and so i will feel beter soon and so i dont keep it in side me

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thanks all of you guys for your opinion :)

OpenStudy (m.d.saxon):

YW

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

You're welcome!! :D And yes, never keep emotions bottled up inside.. that's the worst feeling ever. You know I'm always here for you to talk to about anything. c:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i know sis and i always do :)

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