These are the poems that i just made tonight and i really hope you like them because this is my first day writing one and ever one says im good at it but i really hope you like them:) He stole my heart, He stole my mind, He stole my every thing, He broke my mind, He broke my heart, he broke my every thing. THATS MY FIRST ONE i trusted you, i forgave you, i made a mistake, i still love you, but i can never trust you. THATS MY SECOND ONE i trusted you, you broke it, i forgave you, i made a mustake, i'm sorry, i love you, just can't trust you, why does it have to be like this, i wanna trust you, but i can't. THAT'S MY THIRD ONE your hand fits right in my hand, your mind fits right in my mind, your warmth fits right in my warmth, your every thing fits right in my every thing.
@Whitemonsterbunny17 @countryboy97 @stromberg1
For the second & third one I think you mean mistake, and for the last one I think you meant hand, but otherwise, they are all really beautiful and emotional poems!! (:
thanks @Whitemonsterbunny17. I found my new talent and that is writing poems cuz i think i am good at them but i just cant believe i can write them cuz i have always wanted to write one but now i no i can write one and it is a awesome feeling cuz its just like writing a song. Thanks so much for your thought about this:)
Tis a wonderful talent to possess!! :D You are definitely very good at writing poems, and yes, I can totally relate to that feeling. And you're welcome!! :3 Keep up the good work, sis! c:
Thanks so much sis and i will sis:) this is just like so amazing i just can't believe it :)
I love it!
You've got talent, there's no doubt!
thanks @LenKagamineFanGirl It means a lot to me:)
No problem!
:)
err mer gerrd those r cool bro!
thanks lol i write them last night but that have meaning to them for all four of them:) Thanks @lovelychick13
np gurl:)'
:)
@Darrius
I love ittt!!
thanks sis:)
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