Question

OK this is a song me and my 2 bff's worked on it is in the comments

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My mind say one thing my heart say another i dont know what to say about my lover he says that he love me but then he leaves me should i move on or keep fighting for his loving (love) i dont know what to do i am just tired of crying over my lover it is taring me apart to know that he was lying about what he felt inside

i deserved so much better then a guy that is going to treat me like trash that is why i am leaving your sorry white A$$ and i am going to for a man that is not going to treat me like that.so go find someone else that likes to be treated like that because this girl right her isnt going to tolerated it

Answer 2

i want to thank @HelpBlahBlahBlah and @ilovehim14<3 for help me with this =)

Answer 3

ur welcome anytime

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what do u think @AppleJuice420

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@iPwnBunnies

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@rainbowpotato

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@DullJackel09 what do you think?

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@Niall

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Well, you said it's directed at nobody in particular, but you defined the man as white. >.>

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lol^

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well i i started reading it it reminded me of my ex

Answer 12

Um.

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Lol, good work i look forward to reading more :)

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Tales. XD

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@WinryRockbell are we puting more to it do i need to think of more

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Bunnies... what the actual..?

Answer 17

@ilovehim14<3 i think we will add more just not right now

Answer 18

**Quickly transitions back to Mozart while rocking gently in his chair**

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ota

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okay lol^

Answer 21

Um... what's ota.

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Orthopaedic Trauma Association

Answer 23

Over the air?

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Online Trust Alliance?

Answer 25

ota is okay in baby talk duh

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^

Answer 27

That makes no sense?

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u just dont know how to tal lke a baby then

Answer 29

^say that talking like a baby^

Answer 30

Please, you're diminishing my IQ. Excuse me, while I jump off my nearest local bridge. o.O

Answer 31

Same.

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ota

Answer 33

i wrealy dont care dates your lawst

Answer 34

i dont have anyone to impress but one person but then again i dont even have to impress him i love u bby @AppleJuice420

Answer 35

May my soul rot in hell, but you seem like the type of person who can't figure out how to put on their own clothes in the morning without stopping to play with a piece of yarn. That, or you're around the age of 6.

P.S: These lyrics are absolutely dreadful; there are only a handful of valid time signatures that with comply with that pentameter, not to mention the fact that it seems you're lacking the BASICS of music theory in order to compose/produce an actual song. However, you can go with this method ---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yu_W--kjhEo. Cheers, and good night to you...

Answer 36

lol yw @WinryRockbell

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@mikeyymonroe

Answer 38

this is an awesome song good job michaelea

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thanks

Answer 40

of course lol

Answer 41

Sooo... is that a chorus... bridge... verse... I can't tell

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*cough*

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^

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@WinryRockbell dont take all the credit i did most of it

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i did not

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you did some

Answer 47

Oh no... better take it up with the copyright office ^

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I HAVE BROUGHT NEW LIFE TO THIS THREAD!

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God praise the Saint!

Answer 50

...

Answer 51

So when are the lyrics coming to life? Perhaps it might be as good as this song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yu_W--kjhEo. God, this song just makes my skin creep... it's so overwhelmingly good, it's bad.

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I am The Saint. Ruler of the Underworld of Openstudy. Follow Thou Me. I am the Messiah of this new world. We shall strike against those who oppose us. Follow me, my children, as we come unto the land known as Middle Earth and siege the destruction to once again restore peace to the world

Answer 53

**Gets on knees** Praise the Saint!

Answer 54

...........?

Answer 55

My first rule of business is we resurrect Tupac Shakur. Then with that, recruit the Killuminati to demolish the Fire Nation

Answer 56

Happytales. Please prepare a Human Transmutation Circle

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OMG i am so confused

Answer 58

In return for the life of Tupac, I shall sacrifice Justin Beiber and One Direction

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god my brain

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SO ANYWAYS

Answer 61

It has come to my attention you are writing a song?

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Everyone ran away :c

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um yeah we r got a prob with it

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yep

Answer 65

So hows that song going

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can u read

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.........be nice please

Answer 68

well can he what the song says is how its going lol

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Yes I can read. If I couldn't, then there would be no possible way for me to read or respond to this thread

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then u can read how the song is going right

Answer 71

uhuh....

Answer 72

In my term "How is the song going" I meant current progress on the song because you got two verses. Now I do not think that is a completed song

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Sigh... have you ever tried composing a sonata... it's hell and back

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it is not we are sill working

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we r working n the reast

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and how is that going?

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fine

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we r not working right now^

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but fine^

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stfu @happytales

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Hm...

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...........

Answer 83

Well, there is some unnecessary hostility here

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stfu idk if u think im crazzy or not u dont need to be rude @happytales

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Interestingly enough, why are you creating this "musical arrangement" that will most likely be completely useless and theoretical at the end of the day...

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I'm just curious.

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cuz i been holding it back^

Answer 88

Freestyle raps last only a few minutes, but have a lasting effect

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only last*

Answer 90

Because I compose generally because it has some value, such as a a full ride to Julliard... Interesting.

Answer 91

i told u @WinryRockbell im going to tell people how i fell if they piss me off but my bf was calming me down that is y i didnt let it go earlier

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Then again, lyrical text is another thing... but it does help to have "poetic talent"...

Answer 93

Saint do you remember: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfVsfOSbJY0

ahhhhhh... lol

Answer 94

Oh yeah. Do you remember this? You might if you ever saw it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVzINKRbekY&feature=youtu.be

Answer 95

Oh yeah.. Love it Rick Astley

Answer 96

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