Question

I need help on writing a song...more like ideas or poem lines you dont mind me using..happy or sad..anything helps!

Answer 1

we'll whats this song for ?

Answer 2

i use to write songs for a girl and...things have happened and im not feeling anything much anymore so...just stopped feeling music all together...so im lost with inspiration

Answer 3

we'll lucky you i write :) so lets think of some ideas ... how about you're break up ?

Answer 4

ive never had a girlfriend...but would shattered feelings work?

Answer 5

wuhh? what kind of music are you in to ?

Answer 6

Hard rock, punk, emo, heavy and some scream, and punk romance

Answer 7

cant scream tho lol

Answer 8

Oh i'm sorry i can't help you im R&B , Rap , Country && Jazz

Answer 9

i can help

Answer 10

both of you are very helpful

Answer 11

lol we'll tankchuu

Answer 12

i write all music

Answer 13

i have this one song, its borderline nope because this huge ordeal with her guy. but im thinking about saying eff it and producing it anyway

Answer 14

put it on youbtube

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im short rec equipment, but i have some stuff for live performances and concerts

Answer 16

do you have garageband

Answer 17

PC...

Answer 18

do you have garageband on your PC

Answer 19

no, my key to Fl producers broke

Answer 20

ok

Answer 21

but i can still help

Answer 22

not having very good luck so far lol....

Answer 23

me that is

Answer 24

well lets get started

Answer 25

alright how do we do that?

Answer 26

well do you have the first line done

Answer 27

i'm working on a song it's like
I don't understand what's going on , i don't understan why you're gone
i wake up every morning wondering how did this go wrong
looking back at all those day's you cried wanting your daughter by your side
and now your gone so far away and now your gone but in the wrong way I never wanted to wake up knowing you ain't there........... lmao i have a lot of work but the beat is sick lol

Answer 28

Thats pretty daw to me lol its great

Answer 29

brei i like it

Answer 30

I have the "full song" minus cleaning some lines and writing the music lol

Answer 31

but you'll still need to work on some words

Answer 32

maybe write about a bad time in you're life like i just did & thxs guys && yeaah i know lol

Answer 33

i do write music that is sad like that

Answer 34

The one i have is very mad/slamming if my phone will connect to the schools Wifi that is

Answer 35

hmmm i can help you both

Answer 36

lol maybe

Answer 37

i went to ball and got stood up by the same girl...twice..so when we went to dinner i wrote it on my phone in notes lol

Answer 38

i have a rule when i help some write a song it there's and they all get the credit and that's the rule of open study

Answer 39

but you have to supply imfomation

Answer 40

i understand but i have too go sorry

Answer 41

well it was nice talking to you brei

Answer 42

what info you need? im an open book

Answer 43

ok ready to start

Answer 44

ok what is your first line

Answer 45

yup ^~^

Answer 46

sorry lagggg

Answer 47

I told you the truth
you told me his lies
i told you i care
and i started to cry

Answer 48

i love (I told you the truth

Answer 49

but the next line might need a little work on it

Answer 50

whats your take for the second line?

Answer 51

swapping class brb if i can

Answer 52

I told you the truth you told me once and all my lie's come out

(it optionally

Answer 53

it up you how you want it i fine with both

Answer 54

Is anybody actually going to help instead of chat?

Answer 55

I told you the truth
you told me his lies
I told you I care
and I started to cry

Now he's got you at the stroke of 12
And I saw you with nobody els
This is, wait was our night to remember
And I am or was your date in December

You say he loves you
I told you that's bull sh#t
You say he accepts you
I said in the bed room maybe
Now he's holding you and I feel left out
He's got you and I got used

Why can't you see
That he's gunna leave
Why can't you see
That your still incomplete
Why can't you see
that he's just gunna use you
Why can you see
You should be with me

He made a bet with all of his friends
To see if he could get into your pants
I'm telling you that he's no good
Why can't you see him like you should

And now you have a boyfriend
And I had a best friend
I was your best friend
And wanted more

Why can't you see
That he's gunna leave
Why can't you see
That your still incomplete

I use to wish for you and me
now I'm praying for your safety
But you swore to me that you'd stay pure
and you swore to me your so sure

But why'd you leave
And why'd I let you
I thought we'd be forever and so true
I guess all things have a true end
But so far this all seems to false

Answer 56

there is the full thing

Answer 57

ok

Answer 58

nice

Answer 59

Now theres a few spots that have a different pronunciation

Answer 60

ok

Answer 61

did you write the music for it? @blink- 182

Answer 62

@blink-182 *

Answer 63

oh my god, that is freakin amazing! it is almost how i feel about a guy though.

Answer 64

@Poetrylover your welcome to share your thoughts and ill do my best to write for you..He** ill write for your own use

Answer 65

@Nahstya i write all my songs but running low on ideas feel free to put your 2 cents in lol