MEDAL!!! How can I make this sentence less wordy?:

Through Tom’s trial, we can see the hurtful and deadly effects of racism, and how it undermines every aspect of humanity’s morality.

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MEDAL!!! How can I make this sentence less wordy?:

Through Tom’s trial, we can see the hurtful and deadly effects of racism, and how it undermines every aspect of humanity’s morality.

anonymous · Answer

In tom's trial it undermines every aspect of humanity's morality and we could all see hurtful deadly effects of racism. Maybe but play around with it try making it into two sentences and switch it around Sorry hope this helps

gk99 · Answer

thanks so much! :) I'll play around with it

anonymous · Answer

Your welcome sorry i couldnt exactly help