Question

@PoetryPrincess Can u check out the summary of my story? I also need a title. :):):):)

Answer 1

Hold on. :) I need to type it up. :)

Answer 2

Alright.

Answer 3

BRB, I GOTTA EAT DINNER BUT I REALLY WANT YOU TO READ THIS. :) SO DON'T LEAVE OS!!!!

Answer 4

Okay, no problem! (:

Answer 5

I g2g, but write it down here whenever and next time I get on I'll take a look at it! (:

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@PoetryPrincess Here's what I have so far, but I really wanna change it. :)

Stolen Love

SUMMARY - Alex Grey, a wanted thief. Jake Colt, a special agent in the FBI who's been looking for the Black Rose his entire career. Alex just happens to be her. The two meet and fall in love quickly. What happens when Alex's past and her career get in the way. There’s a common enemy near and he will stop at nothing to get Alex away and Jake from finding out.

Answer 7

Hmm. How about?
Alex Grey, AKA The Black Rose. Her hair is black as night, and her alter ego is full of pride. Some say she's a thief, others say she's a killer. But who to believe!?
Jake Colt, AKA Top Secret FBI Agent. His entire career is at stake-if he doesn't find The Black Rose ASAP. He goes deep in undercover meeting a mysterious girl along the way and falls in love-who would of known it was The Black Rose!?
What happens when he finds out it is her and she finds out what he is!?
What will he do, what will she do!?
I guess you'll have to wait and see!

(I tried-idk if you'll like it or not. I tried making it sound intense and intriguing. You can change it around if you'd like. Hope I help!:)

Answer 8

@CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 9

I LOVE it!!!! Except for a few things.
* Her hair is definitely not black.
* She's not prideful...more sarcastic. :)
* She's nowhere near a killer.
* He doesn't go undercover.

So, ok...Most of it doesn't fit the story line at all. Though I love the summary. I'm going to have to ask my twin sister to help. I'll see if I can get your help when I have more of the plot written. @poetryprincess Thanks though! I REALLY APPRECIATE IT! :)

Answer 10

Okay, sorry. I didn't quite know what all you was looking for. Lol.

Answer 11

The title is Stolen Love, but I was also thinking of Thief of my heart. They're both so cliche though. :(

Answer 12

Do you want to read what I have so far?

Answer 13

Sure.

Answer 14

What do you think? That's all I have so far. I don't know what to add to make it longer. All I know is that I need to add more detail. I don't know how long the first chapter should be. 0_0

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Some parts I know I switched from first person to third person POV. I have issues with that but my sister is going to edit that. :)

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I like it!
It does have some errors-but nothing a good edit wouldn't fix.
Other than that though it's really great! And the chapter can be how ever long you want it to be, it don't really matter. I think the length is perfect.
BTW,
Do you have a wattpad? (:

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Yeah, I do. I have a watt pad and a fan fiction. I'm on fan fic all the time and have posted one story. Though I full admit I'm not on watt pad a lot because it annoys me that it's just one more website i can't figure out. LOL. :) I haven't posted anything on watt pad either. :):):) @PoetryPrincess

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Ohhhh. Lol. I'm on wattpad, I'm working on 2 novels on there. I usually update my novels every few days.

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Fan Fiction - CazyCountryGirl12
Watt Pad - Art_Rebel_Freak (I think that's what it is. :))

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I couldn't find anyone named Art_Rebel_Freak on there. Lol. (:

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Rebel_Art_Freak? IDK.

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Did you look up my fan fiction one? :):):)

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I don't have a fan fiction account.

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Oh. :) Do you still wanna read it? :)

Answer 25

Yea! (:

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@PoetryPrincess https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9713930/1/Broken-Experiments

Answer 27

What do u think? :)

Answer 28

@PoetryPrincess

Answer 29

VERY NICE! (:

Answer 30

Yay! Thanks! :):):)

Answer 31

You're welcome! (:

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:)