Question

Identify the problem with the following sentence.

Cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.

A.use of passive voice
B.wordiness
C.inconsistent style

Answer 1

I think its B.

Answer 2

Yes. B. Wordiness