Here are my questions
LOL, these arent questions these are your assignments for vhs english xD
What does vhs mean
virtual high school
So for the first, what is your standpoint on going to space?
@melonhead23 ?
sorry they should devote more
Now make a list of bulletin for why. Give around 3 or 4.
a bulletin ?
Like point form.
oh ok do i put that on the paper or just write that donw in notes
sorry i ment down
You write it down. It's just an outline for now, so you know what you'll be writing in an essay. It helps most people organize their ideas so their support is stronger, especially in a timed essay
ok then what
Now write a thesis that shows your stand and (if you want) a paraphrase of your supporting sentences.
is that all for that one
For what one?
Oh, no, not at all! We've barely begun! Now you have to start on the essay. Mind telling me what you wrote for your thesis?
i dont have a thesis statement
You just sent your prompt again. I know your prompt. What have you been doing this whole time? Your thesis should be something like "Due to this, I believe we should continue sending resources to outer space" or "It is highly beneficial to devote resources to space, especially when one considers blah, blah blah"
What grade are you in?
i sent it because someone eles is helping me to and it would not open i just got this paper from my teacher today and im in 9th grade
Oh, I see. Well, that should be a little easier than, since you will start writing essays differently when you get into high school (especially grade 12). But, for now, you will only need to follow the rules in writing it. Have you learnt the sandwich thing? Where your intro and conclusion are the buns, and the three body paragraphs are your lettuce, patty, and whatever?
no
Has your teacher ever taught you to write an essay before?
yeah i now how to write an essay im in a virtual high school
I see, so you understood what I meant about first finding your supporting points, then writing your thesis, before you begin your essay? After you're done those, you can start your intro. This brings the reader into the essay by explaining a few things that are interesting.
@Butterlicious4 do u thing u can help with this one
Sure
When I open your attachment it says to write a 35 minute essay. Is that what I am supposed to do?
you dont have to if you do not want to but that is the assignment
but can you relate to it
Wait are you in Flvs
whats Flvs
Florida Virtual School
no im in californa Virtual academy
Okay. I wont be able to write the essay because I have to get off the computer soon. But I can do it later.
ok thats fine just let me know when ok
Ok
@YannaFree
what i do is i just google the name of the book and then summary and i use that but change the words around but what exactly do you need help with
Did u do an assignment on it before
No we didnt use that book when i was a freshmen
Oh OK well if I attach the file will you know the answers
attach the file .
If you google im pretty sure you can get these anserws thats what im doing right now for an essay
Hello??
because you have to put it in your own words .
Do u know Harrison bergeron and letter from Birmingham
no sorry i do not know those
@asatt32
What is your opinion on this? Do you think space exploration and research is a good way to spend government money and citizen tax dollars? First, open your essay with your stance on the argument. You should develop this into your introduction. Then, in each body paragraph, make a point about your argument. Why do you have your opinion? Talk about tax dollars being used (good/bad), government money being spent (it could possibly increase national debt), why you think/don't think space exploration is important, how impacts society, whether it is important for society growth, science, etc. In your conclusion, much like your introduction, sum up your argument.
ok thank you
any luck @asatt32
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