im a country boy but i like to rap i have written one wrap just messing around and would like to know what you think of it and if you have any comments ... im just curious of what people would think of it .....

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anonymous · Answer

here it is

beccaboo333 · Answer

I wanna read it but I don't have the new version of word :/ Can you post the it as a comment? So I can read it c:

anonymous · Answer

I will

anonymous · Answer

my lips are the gun
my smile is the trigger
my kisses are the bullets
baby label me me a killer
like the tv channel chiller baby you can be a thriller
i had a heart brake but baby u a healer
i was bound lost in temptation sitting up at night lost in contemplation
i found the cure the for sure medication
your love
your heart
my full concentration
for you i promise dedication
therefore if loving yous a crime
girl ill do the time
forget them short years give me 25 to life
 now let me lay it
girl i think you need to know
i aint rymin just to flow
keep lovin you like this my mind might even blow
do you love me for show
if so i give you my heart
hold it ill wrap it with a bow
hunny now you know my love i do show
man its time to hit the road baby lets go

anonymous · Answer

my lips are the gun
my smile is the trigger
my kisses are the bullets
baby label me me a killer
like the tv channel chiller baby you can be a thriller
i had a heart brake but baby u a healer
i was bound lost in temptation sitting up at night lost in contemplation
i found the cure the for sure medication
your love
your heart
my full concentration
for you i promise dedication
therefore if loving yous a crime
girl ill do the time
forget them short years give me 25 to life
 now let me lay it
girl i think you need to know
i aint rymin just to flow
keep lovin you like this my mind might even blow
do you love me for show
if so i give you my heart
hold it ill wrap it with a bow
hunny now you know my love i do show
man its time to hit the road baby lets go

anonymous · Answer

Oh :D

anonymous · Answer

lol thanks @Derek_Gomez7

anonymous · Answer

:D Its really good

beccaboo333 · Answer

It is really good c:

anonymous · Answer

im a poet i have three published poems and have written 32 of them  i just thought i would try rapping

beccaboo333 · Answer

Well it's really good. I like it.

anonymous · Answer

im going to post another one thats still in progress maybe yall could help out