Question

tell me what you think ... please dont criticize what its about...

Answer 1

AGH I CAN'T VIEW IT T_T

Answer 2

life is a killer, god is the healer,
when your shooken up, you feelin like you lost
actin like you stuck,
sittin on them street sides, triyin to raise a buck,
you loosin hope youve givin up
lost not found mind confused, u spirit bound
in this mixed up life you slowly diein
you caught in the midst of your mama cryin
you think its fly sitting up night, popping those pills
smokin those blunts an gettin high
look around you got no home, livin on the back streets all alone
you think you cool, cussin up a storm
droppin outta school, you aint looking fly
you lookin like fool
listen i aint rappin so i can hate let me sit here
let me lay it strait, this life you be livin
every step you take u sinin, hold up im just beginin
theres another way, than this life you livin
itll whipe you cleaner then new white linen
make a choice you have a voice
this is a new direction
hes always here to fallow, hes the man of perfection
jesus is his name, the bible is his lesson
the choice is yours, to make the cofession
hes lived for you since before the Resurrection
listen up, no one knows of his complexion
he will free you from devastation
for hes the king of restoration

Answer 3

Is this a poem?

Answer 4

nope not at all just a rap ....

Answer 5

@love_jessika15 thought you might like this

Answer 6

it sounds good

Answer 7

thank you !!!....

Answer 8

I love it! Good lyrics.

Answer 9

thank you ... nobody has told me how i could make it better :)

Answer 10

Because there is no need to its perfect!

Answer 11

Its fantastic ! just try to make it rhyme more ... then it would be perfect . Hey why don't you be a rapper ? :)

Answer 12

awesome i love it!

Answer 13

I'm not really religious...but this is amazing. It's beautiful, would love to hear it in a song. Keep writing. :)