Question

I wrote my 'Outline Your Argument' paper, and I got an F on it. Can someone explain to me why I did so bad, or what I did wrong? I have attached more down below.

Answer 1

Here are the directions, and the outline i should follow. And here is also what I wrote.

Answer 2

@ManImStumped can you help? I decided to open a new question. I rewrote my paper but still got an F.

Answer 3

@e.mccormick @Hero can one of you help me?

Answer 4

Wow, there's a lot of reasons you didn't pass on this. Are you new to essays? Here's some reasons:
- Your introduction jumps right into the essay without first explaining what you're talking about
- Your thesis is supposed to be the last sentence of the first paragraph. It will be paraphrased to make the first sentence of the last paragraph
- When you use a quote, make sure you tell where its from; i.e. (Act 1, Scene 2, Line 3). Also, explain your quote and why it enhances your own position.
- Each paragraph needs at least four sentences. Having two is not good enough.
Sorry, that was a lot. We'll have to go through this entire thing again. Also, on an important note, what has your teacher's feedback been?

Answer 5

@madesynrose ?