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Answer 1

You'll need to send it another way, since the link won't open

Answer 2

Nope. Can you just save it on word and send that?

Answer 3

That was a great essay and an even greater read. Some pointers, though, if your teachers mark anything like mine do, try to integrate some linking phrases/words like 'Thus, Therefore, On the other hand, In conclusion'. This is if your teachers care for those things. I loved the essay with how you began with a quote, though maybe try to have a clincher that is a question or an awesome ending sentence. Overall, I have seen no grammar errors that obstruct the reading, or any, actually. Great job :)

Answer 4

And by clincher, I mean the last sentence ^_^