Question

WILL FAN AND GIVE MEDAL

Answer 1

How have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? After reading and analyzing "The Calypso Borealis," an essay by John Muir, and William Wordsworth's poem "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.

Answer 2

Need help creating a hook

Answer 3

did you read?

Answer 4

yeah ofcourse

Answer 5

so do what you are required to do

Answer 6

create an opening paragraph that responds to the prompt

Answer 7

If I can create the opening paragraph I can construct the rest of the essay

Answer 8

here is what I have so far I think I will use this for the thesis
The authors of Calypso Borealis and “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud,” not only through the diction , vocabulary, and syntax, but also through the impact of tone, and mood, and while both authors express their relationship in different ways there is still the essence of them impact on the audience.

Answer 9

that's a very long sentence, all run-on...this is my opinion.
I think if you just opened your introduction with a "hook" or a sentence that captures the readers attention would be better. I better "hook" sentence i can give is:
Two literary works best conveyed nature in their own manner, one called "The Calypso Borealis," an essay written by John Miller called and a poem written by William Wordsworth's called "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud."
--
From there,
post this-The authors of Calypso Borealis and “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud,” not only through the diction , vocabulary, and syntax, but also through the impact of tone, and mood, and while both authors express their relationship in different ways there is still the essence of them impact on the audience.
and fix the the sentence avoiding run-ons
that's the best i can give.

Answer 10

maybe you could start with an interesting fact to start off that might help

Answer 11

that is great Zale! Hold on while I construct the thing. Do you think you could proof it before I turn it in?

Answer 12

yeah i wasnt very helpful so sorry

Answer 13

I will, if you construct your paragraph by avoiding the additional comas so your paragraph doesn't contain a run-on sentence. So yeah, i can look at it.

Answer 14

How is this?
These two literary works best convey nature in their own way, one through a poem written by William Wordsworth's called "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud." and the other through a descriptive essay. The Calypso Borealis," by John Miller. Both author created specific work that captures the beauty of nature, while displaying their compassion and emotion for such beauty. They each capture the essence in their own way, one through a poem while the other through an essay , each using a their own descriptive imagery to cultivate the scenery and amazement of the experience. William Wordsworth and John Miller not only through the diction , vocabulary, and syntax, but also through the impact of tone, and mood, and while both authors express their relationship in different ways there is still the essence of them impact on the audience.

Answer 15

I noticed that you place periods instead of comas after the title "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud."

Answer 16

and another period after The Calypso Borealis," by John Miller.

Answer 17

periods are placed only if the sentence has ended.

Answer 18

okay I fixed them in the original do u want me to post is again with the corrections?

Answer 19

Here's your sentence or sentences
These two literary works best convey nature in their own way, one through a poem written by William Wordsworth's called "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud." and the other through a descriptive essay. The Calypso Borealis," by John Miller.

the last sentence:
The Calypso Borealis," by John Miller. Its a fragment :/

Answer 20

that's only a subject without a predict

Answer 21

predicate *

Answer 22

okay I fixed those too thank you so much for being so helpful

Answer 23

Np

Answer 24

These two literary works best convey nature in their own way, one through a poem written by William Wordsworth's called "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," and the other through a descriptive essay "The Calypso Borealis," by John Miller.
-Should look like this

Answer 25

I am going to leave now but If I tag u in a question do u thin u could help me tomorrow?

Answer 26

If i'm online, and in Openstudy then yes

Answer 27

okay I will create it now but we can work on it Tomorrow okay?