Question

hey guys this rap is for math class is it good

Ryan G in the flesh, I'm comin correct
I keep my hair cut clean and command respect

my lines dope like coca go to your brain through your nasal
cuz your ears can't process my legitimate flava

Got power like Capone and respect like Bugs Moran
you'll compare never never and grow up like peter pan

cause Cash Rules Everything is not imagining
Around Me the green is more than a dream

Got more Benjamins than patent office
more Presidents than social studies

After school I've no time for Lincoln
Cuz I'm counting his bu

Answer 1

l!ke it ":)

Answer 2

There is a music section on OpenStudy. Please close this and open it there.

Answer 3

like it

Answer 4

Needs more rhymes but its still pretty good.

Answer 5

yo a rap isnt about rhymes is about the flow lemme see what u got

Answer 6

wow ive seen better rapping from wiz kalifa!!!! lol im a musical genius so if u need any help im the guy to contact ;*

Answer 7

look @Megadevon rap may be about the flow but it also has to do with rhymes as well I mean the rap or whatever it is that you wrote just looks like you were just trying to type regularly this is because you have no rhymes you see with an attitude like that your not going to go very far man cause you obviously don't know very much about rap I don't mean to sound disrespectful or nothing but its true

Answer 8

Look bro a rap isnt poem there isnt just rhymes i know what u tring to say but with my raps and plenty of other rappers they dont use all rhymes the flow of a rap is where the rhymes will enter if the rap comes toghter well it is fine anyways this isnt my best rap this one is just school appropriate for the kid the challenged me

Answer 9

whatever man im sick of this conversation so have a nice day

Answer 10

copy right it quick