Question

Hello I need help!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

Hai!!!
What can I help you with? *^.^*

Answer 2

Effective Introduction—Worksheet
Instructions: Copy and paste the following text into a document or create a document that contains the same information. Complete the following steps and your introduction will be written!
Your Writing Prompt:
How have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? After reading and analyzing "The Calypso Borealis," an essay by John Muir, and William Wordsworth's poem "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.
Look back at the list of hook techniques. Which two techniques could you use to introduce your essay effectively? Facts or Statistics and Bold Statement

1.

Choose one of those techniques for your hook and briefly explain why you chose that technique. Bold statement The reason why chosen bold statement because it will be easier for me to out it the statement is true.
2.

3. Write the hook for your essay in the space below.
John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and connect to nature but they were depressed but the nature brought them happiness.

4. Write a two- to four-sentence bridge to connect your hook and thesis statement.

5. Write your thesis statement. Include any revisions your instructor suggested or you think are needed.
6. Now, copy and paste the sentences from numbers 3, 4, and 5 (above) into one paragraph in the space below. Congratulations! You have your introduction written!

Answer 3

I need help with number 4

Answer 4

Oh, I would have to see your other work to be able to help you with that one.. :s

Answer 5

okay

Answer 6

number 5 is John and William talked about how that nature is beautiful, how it helps and change their mindset doing their journey using vivid imagery.

Answer 7

what else?

Answer 8

I actually need your answers to 1, 2, and 3.
Because it wants you to write a bridge for those.

Answer 9

1.Facts or Statistics and Bold Statement
2. Bold statement The reason why chosen bold statement because it will be easier for me to out it the statement is true.
1.Facts or Statistics and Bold Statement

Answer 10

Oh, okay. soooo what about #3?

Answer 11

John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and connect to nature but they were depressed but the nature brought them happiness. @Whitemonsterbunny17

Answer 12

Okay, what is your thesis statement??

Answer 13

John and William talked about how that nature is beautiful, how it helps and change their mindset doing their journey using vivid imagery.

Answer 14

Okay, so now with that information, you need to come up with something to connect (or bridge) them together, to make a flowing article. (:
First, though, we should fix some grammar issues with your hook and thesis.

Answer 15

OKAY SURE

Answer 16

Hook:
John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state.
How does that look? (:

Answer 17

perfect

Answer 18

Awesome!! *^.^*
Now, for the thesis:

John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and how it helped to change their mindset during their journey. They used vivid imagery to describe some of nature's beauty, which ended to relieve them from their depressed state.

How does this look? (:

Answer 19

wow amazing

Answer 20

oh the thesis have to be one sentence

Answer 21

Oh, okay.

John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey.

How about this one? :p

Answer 22

nice

Answer 23

Okay, so I didn't actually read the story, but what were some of the details or reasons why John and William said why nature changed their mindset?

Answer 24

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3142040/1/I-Wandered-Lonely-as-a-Cloud-matched-up-to-Calypso-Borealis-About

Answer 25

Is that the story?? o.O

Answer 26

summarie

Answer 27

Oh, well I was asking you lol :p
What details about nature did they include to support their reasoning of why nature can heal the mind?

Answer 28

hey

Answer 29

lol.. hey?? xD

Answer 30

I can you restate your question again

Answer 31

Why did John and William think nature heals the mind?
What were their reasons?

Answer 32

Ummm

Answer 33

xD

Answer 34

Did you read the story?? :p

Answer 35

yeah but its hard

Answer 36

Okay, okay, okay.
Hold on, I'm gonna try to write it.. then see what you think. (:

Answer 37

John and William described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds.

Answer 38

How's that?? (:

Answer 39

good

Answer 40

Haha, awesome!!
That is your answer for #4.
Is that all you need? (:

Answer 41

yes can help me a different assignment but it follows this assignment.

Answer 42

I can try. (:

Answer 43

okay

Answer 44

Outline Template

Complete the following outline in sentences. Copy and paste the text into a document, or create a document of your own with the same information.

You need at least two body paragraphs and the specified number of examples and explanations. If you would like to have additional paragraphs or examples and explanations, just add them to your template.

Writing Prompt:

How have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? After reading and analyzing "The Calypso Borealis," an essay by John Muir, and William Wordsworth's poem, "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.

Hook:
Bridge:

Thesis:

Topic Sentence:
Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text:

Explanation:

Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text:

Explanation:

Topic Sentence:
Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text:

Explanation:

Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text:

Explanation:

Conclusion
You will write a conclusion in a later lesson and do not need to complete this part now.

Answer 45

Oh, I can't really help with this one because I have not read the stories. :/

Answer 46

okay but can you just ask me question and I will answer them just help me right it out?

Answer 47

oh, sure. c:

Answer 48

alright i did the first park the hook

Answer 49

okay, so then you'll have to create a thesis.

Answer 50

do u mean bridge

Answer 51

Well yes, you have to do the bridge too, but you need to make the thesis first because the bridge is a transition between the hook and the thesis. (:

Answer 52

okay

Answer 53

can i use the same bridge?

Answer 54

If it's for the same story lol

Answer 55

yes

Answer 56

Oh, then yeah use the same one. c:

Answer 57

for real"?

Answer 58

Yeah.
Then the next thing it wants is supporting evidence from the story.

Answer 59

okay

Answer 60

is this the bridge? John and William described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds.

Answer 61

yep c:

Answer 62

okay the next thing is

Answer 63

To make supporting evidence from the story.

Answer 64

ok

Answer 65

i will try

Answer 66

Okay. c:

Answer 67

can we finshed this in the morning

Answer 68

Yeah. c:
I'm almost always online. *^.^*

Answer 69

alight see yah later ;)

Answer 70

Lol okay, have a good night. :p

Answer 71

hey

Answer 72

@Whitemonsterbunny17 Im on the topic sentence

Answer 73

did you ever finish this @JBFlyBoiTv