Writing a persuasive essay on 'Exotic Animals should not perform in circuses', I already have paragraphs revolving around the ideas of painful/cruel, frightened animals, stressful and not good for children, any other ideas? (preferably ones that really tug on heartstrings/ insightful/ persuasive)

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anonymous · Answer

Well i think you have some very good ideas and want to keep it to that. However what i would do is think of reason why someone might disagree with you. Then you need to find reasons why those beliefs are invalid. Dont be rude just simply state why theyre wrong. Even if they have an idea of some sort you can always say in theroy this works but when done in the real world it is ineffective. I hope this helps