Question

The night is silent
The moon is lounder than any quite night
Just me and the road
No one to hold
I see a bright light
Then boom I'm gone
Red lights flashing Voices overwhelm the night silence
But I'm out of my mind
My soul is already gone
I didn't never say I love you too? Don't cry just smile cause in your heart is where I will be.

Answer 1

Wow Beautifully written ! Pretty nice I loved it <3

Answer 2

Thank you xD

Answer 3

>.< It's really good Jess. A lot of meaning

Answer 4

Thanks essie

Answer 5

Wow Jess....I'm speechless<3 Love it!

Answer 6

Oh. Intense o-o
I love it :D

Answer 7

Thank you krissy <3 Thank you @TacoGod :)

Answer 8

JESS I AM IMPRESSED! I love it!!! <3

Answer 9

Thank you xD I'm glad you like it :) <3

Answer 10

♥

Answer 11

aww dat so epic. like this shiz is legit jess! reall legit!

Answer 12

Lol, thank you Josie :P

Answer 13

np gurl. i love to read shiz!

Answer 14

haha

Answer 15

This is well written :o I'm impressed, Gurl. Work it.

Answer 16

Lol thank you sysy xD

Answer 17

I love this bunches!!!!! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333

Answer 18

Awh. Thanks, Sammi :3

Answer 19

I love this.

Answer 20

Wow didn't know you were a beast lol very nice

Answer 21

haha thanks @jbreezy622 and Thanks :P @punksauce

Answer 22

I enjoyed, well done.

Answer 23

Thanks :3

Answer 24

Its really good :) but why does it have a sad ending ? :P

Answer 25

Thank you :) I just wanted to try something different, every poem I write has an happy ending.

Answer 26

fair enough :)

Answer 27

Great Poem :)

Answer 28

Good job @Jesstho.-.

Answer 29

Thank you, Zale :) I'm glad you like it.

Answer 30

I like it, I think you've inspired me to get into reading some more poetry actually. Also, I think you misspelled "quiet" as "quite" there!

Answer 31

thats good @Jesstho.-. its nice for self expression... it has a deep meaning to it too *2 thumbs up*

Answer 32

Thank you guys xD @Kainui and @elementwielder

Answer 33

well written jess..:)
make it happy ending next time.:D

Answer 34

Haha, I will and thanks :)

Answer 35

recommended edit:

The moon is lounder than any quite night
The moon is LOUDER than any QUIET night

I didn't never say I love you too? Don't cry just smile cause in your heart is where I will be.
I never had the chance to say I love you too? DO NOT cry, and just smile because I will be in your heart.

Answer 36

Well done, Nin. Thank you, I will take that advice :)

Answer 37

*claps* Bravo my friend, bravo. A wonderful poem. :)

Answer 38

Thank you :)

Answer 39

Wow that was delicious!

Answer 40

hehe thanks xD

Answer 41

WOW!!! *o* VERy Well Written HUN!! I LOVE IT!!!!❤

Answer 42

its awesome jess ^.^

Answer 43

thank you arab <3 Thank you random :)

Answer 44

youre welcome jess!

Answer 45

its beautiful D: and i didnt hit you with my car casue u ate my enchilada

Answer 46

not at all

Answer 47

LOL thank you :)

Answer 48

Welcoms xD

Answer 49

I love it baby c; You did really well c:

Answer 50

Thank you