Question

Help! Please read and tell me how my paper is! It's a perspective paer of the history of computers through the eyes of a Mac. Thanks!

Answer 1

@CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 2

I love it! :) Though...How come you tagged ME? :)

Answer 3

You were available, and I thought you were the best for the job. @CrazyCountryGirl

Answer 4

Thanks! :)

Answer 5

Is there anyone else that can give me feed back?

Answer 6

These people are awesome in this subject..
@PoetryPrincess
@orion92898
@kenziejo1998
@SnowCrystal
@Destinymasha
@Whitemonsterbunny17

Answer 7

I see a few grammatical issues, but other than that, I think this was VERY well written! You included intriguing details, that induced the viewer to keep on reading. I love the subject of computers, and computer history. I thought you wrote it well enough to spark interest within an individual who typically isn't interested in that subject.
Anyway,
Awesome work! If you want me to go into detail of what grammatical issues there were, just tell me, and I'm more than happy to go through that with you. (:

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Answer 8

Thank you so much guys! @CrazyCountryGirl @Whitemonsterbunny17