Can Someone help me write a conclusion for my essay?
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John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state. They both described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds. John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey.I. Hook: John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state. A. Bridge: John and William described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds. B. Thesis: John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey. II. Topic Sentence: The ways John connect to nature and how it helps him. A. Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text: John said “how long I sat beside Calypso I don't know. Hunger and weariness vanished, B. Explanation: The flower help him forgot about being hungry and being lost. C. Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text: John said “It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human hearts. “ D. Explanation: He is saying how much power the plant have over humans emotions. III. Topic Sentence: The ways William connect to nature and how it helps him. A. Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text: William said “and then my heart with pleasure fills”, And dances with the daffodils. B. Explanation: That he is filled of loved by seeing the daffodils and he is dancing now. C. Example, Reason, Detail, or Fact from the text: William said “A poet could not but be gay” D. Explanation: William is saying a poet cannot be happy.
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A. Bridge: John and William described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds. B. Thesis: John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey.
oh yeah thats my topic sentence
then I miss understood it. give me a sec
my fault i will rewrite for u it going to take me a second
They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state.
John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state. They both described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds. John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey.I. Hook: John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state. John and William described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds. John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey. The ways John connect to nature and how it helps him.John said “how long I sat beside Calypso I don't know. Hunger and weariness vanished.He is saying The flower help him forgot about being hungry and being lost. John also said “It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human hearts." He is saying how much power the plant have over humans emotions. The ways William connect to nature and how it helps him.William said “and then my heart with pleasure fills”,and dances with the daffodils.He is saying that he is filled of loved by seeing the daffodils and he is dancing now.William also said “A poet could not but be gay” William is saying a poet cannot be happy so that's why he is having mix emotions.
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They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state. The ways William connect to nature and how it helps him.William said “and then my heart with pleasure fills”,and dances with the daffodils.He is saying that he is filled of loved by seeing the daffodils and he is dancing now.William also said “A poet could not but be gay” It should be the one for your topic sentence
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R u going to write a conclusion or not
wasn't this your topic sentence A. Bridge: John and William described how the beauty of nature healed their minds. The essence of nature brought upon senses of peace and tranquility to their minds, healing the depression that had once invaded their minds. B. Thesis: John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey.
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give me a minute please. I'm going to reread it to get a better understanding about the question
They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state. The ways William connect to nature and how it helps him.William said “and then my heart with pleasure fills”,and dances with the daffodils.He is saying that he is filled of loved by seeing the daffodils and he is dancing now.William also said “A poet could not but be gay” that is all I'm understanding about this
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