Please can you give me some tips for poetry and narrative writing; I wish to become a poet/author when I grow up! Thanks!
This is one of my poems, please comment on it - critisism welcome! (Please don't copy - I'm eleven years old an it took me a while to write this!)
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Wow! That is a really good poem. I believe that you have great rhyming sense and that you have a really good way with words. I am only 15 myself, but I think it was awesome. :) Keep up your awesome writing skills - you have a lot of talent.I am sure that you can achieve your goal of becoming a poet/author. My only advice is to keep writing, keep practicing, maybe try different types of writing? Like, maybe try doing rhyming poems one day, and the next try free form or another one that you haven't done before. Then, you can see what you enjoyed doing the most and you can work on your weaknesses and preform to your strengths. Keep on writing, and I hope you have a wonderful day. :) ~Gymnastflips (If you have any other stories or poems that you would like to share with me, I would be glad to read them - just drop me a message anytime. :D)
I also like this poem, and agree you should write more, in different styles. Keep up the good work!
Thank you GymnastFlips and mysangels! Your tips and comments made my day! ;D
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