Which version of the sentence is most concise?

The reason the trip is delayed is because we have not collected all the fees.

The reason for the delay is the fees for the trip have not yet been completely collected.

The trip is delayed because all the fees have not yet been collected.

The trip's delay is because of all the fees not yet being collected.

Question

Which version of the sentence is most concise?

The reason the trip is delayed is because we have not collected all the fees.

The reason for the delay is the fees for the trip have not yet been completely collected.

The trip is delayed because all the fees have not yet been collected.

The trip's delay is because of all the fees not yet being collected.

anonymous · Answer

@zafirah

anonymous · Answer

if you dont know this i got more?

zafirah · Answer

i think it's C what do u think?

anonymous · Answer

im not 100% sure but i think is c to because if its not all collected they shouldnt travel or whatever aha

zafirah · Answer

lol yeah that's true...

zafirah · Answer

awww thanx for the medal... :)

anonymous · Answer

no problem im going to open a new thing for you so i can  give you more medals :)

zafirah · Answer

lol ok