Question

please help this is my last thing i have to do to pass l.a please help me someone ill love you forever

Answer 1

Topic question: Should violent video games be banned?

Instructions: You will organize an argument for banning violence from teens’ video games because violent video games are harmful. Read the evidence below and then organize your argument. (Copy and paste the outline below into the feedback box and add your information.)

Argument Organizer

Claim:
In your own words

Reason 1:
In your own words

Support for Reason 1:
Quote from the evidence below

Reason 2:
In your own words

Support for Reason 2:
Quote from the evidence below

Counterclaim:
What is the opposing point of view

Rebuttal Support:
Quote from the evidence below

Conclusion Clincher:
Negative effects that will occur if your readers do not follow your claim
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EVIDENCE 1

Negative Effects of Violent Video Games

In studies conducted by neuroscientists, it was found that teens who regularly play violent video games have lower rates of success in school than teens who do not play violent video games. The same parents who ban violent televisions shows from being watched in their homes must also be careful about the types of video games their teens play. Teens love their games, but their future is at stake.

Excerpt from “Family First Magazine”
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EVIDENCE 2

Negative Effects of Violent Video Games

Fights among best friends and disagreements with peers are a natural part of a teen’s daily life, but studies have consistently shown that teens who play violent video games on a regular basis are more aggressive with peers than teens who do not play these games. Is society willing to ban these violent games to support teen relationships?

Excerpt from “Adolescent Health Sociology Journal
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EVIDENCE 3

Negative Effects of Violent Video Games

A study conducted by teen psychologists found that teens who regularly play violent video games are more prone to having fights and confrontations with adults at home, school and work. Teens want the freedom to play games of their choice, but they need to be aware of the dangers.

Answer 2

@zafirah

Answer 3

idk if you could help me but if you can please do

Answer 4

i do virtual school and this is the last thing i gotta do

Answer 5

ohh my gosh well this is very long..

Answer 6

yes i know its worth 95% of my grade for the year!!! lol

Answer 7

ohh this is hard!!

Answer 8

i know i asked my mom i offerd my sister 20 bucks to do but they said no im like omg please aha

Answer 9

im lost when it comes to writeing

Answer 10

do you know anyone that might be able to help us

Answer 11

ive resarched on google i just cant find nothing

Answer 12

ummm idk maybe try posting the link in the chat box see if any1 is interested

Answer 13

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Answer 14

@aegidious @AmberLynn127 @coledrf @ChasingMaggie @Cpt.Sparz @Compassionate @Darrius @DrPepperx3 @domebotnos @dormanboy97 @edengrace001 @e.mccormick @Futuristicmario @gurrilabill @iheartfood @jamielovesmickey @lexirettenmyer @lu-lou @linn99123 @Lena772 @maipbenrai @momoluvgd @Mel98 @marcoduuuh @Preetha @ParthKohli @rock_mit182 @sdo @sdo @Shay17 @SolomonZelman @samalami @TSwizzle @uri @zafirah

Answer 15

Bro, you're asking us to do this entire project for you? OS is for getting help, not lackies. I'd be more than happy to brainstorm ideas with you, but you need to work on this one yourself. Either you don't have a clue what to do or you just don't care enough to do it. Either way, I'm not helping someone who won't help themselves...

Answer 16

ive alredy tried its 3 time and submitted it and my teacher tells me not good anough re try trust me i care

Answer 17

@aegidious

Answer 18

What english are you in?

Answer 19

this is l.a aha

Answer 20

im in 7th

Answer 21

Did your teacher give you any feedback on what you've submitted?

Answer 22

What have you written? I'm glad to look at it.

Answer 23

Oh yeah, if we could read what you've written, it would help pinpoint what your teacher might not find acceptable

Answer 24

And some examples, references:
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/724/1/
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/
http://www.mesacc.edu/~paoih30491/ArgumentSampleEssays.html

Answer 25

Oh, and a place that specializes on having references on both sides of controversial topics:
http://videogames.procon.org/

Answer 26

its ok i re write it and submitted it but thanks