Question

can someone please revise and fix any grammar issues in the following text:

Answer 1

Appendix A
By: Amy Vincent

A.1 Checking Punctuation and Grammar
a. Companies are finding it to their advantage to cultivate their suppliers. Partnerships between a company and its suppliers can yield hefty payoffs for both company and supplier. One example is Bailey Controls, an Ontario headquartered company. Bailey Controls make control systems for big factories. They treat suppliers almost like departments of their own company. When a Bailey employee passes a laser scanner over a bin’s bar code, the supplier is instantly alerted to send more parts.
b. Entrepreneur, Trip Hawkins, appears in Japanese ads for the video game system his company designed. “It plugs into the future!” he says in one ad, in a cameo spliced into shots of U.S. kids paying the games. Hawkins is one of several U.S. celebrities and business people whom plug products on Japanese TV. Jodie Foster, Harrison Ford, and Charlie Sheen advertise canned coffee, beer, and cigarettes, respectively.

A.2 Providing Punctuation
1. The system’s “user-friendly design” provides screen displays of work codes, rats, and client information.
2. Many other factors also shape the organizations: image, advertising, brochures, proposals, stationary, calling cards, etc.
3. Charlotte Ford, author of “Charlotte Ford’s: Book of Modern Manners” says “Try to mention specifics of the conversation to fix the interview permanently in the interviewer’s mind and be sure to mail the letter the same day; before the hiring decision is made”.
4. What are your room rates and charges for food service?
5. We will need accommodations for one hundred fifty people, five meeting rooms, one large room and four small ones; coffee served during the morning and afternoon breaks, and lunches and dinners.
6. The current student page of Georgian College’s Web site has a link to Turnitin, an on-line plagiarism prevention tool, to help students improve their research and writing skills.
7. Most computer packages will calculate three different sets of percentages: row percentages, column percentages, and table percentages.
8. In today’s economy, it’s almost impossible for a firm to extend credit beyond its regular terms.
9. The Department if Transportation does not have statutory authority to grant easements, however, we do have authority o lease unused areas of highway right-of-way.