Question

ummm ok so I know that I am a horrible person for asking this but I desperately need help in English. I have like 5 Portfolios I have to do and I am horrible at writing and I already took my final for English but I have like a 52 or something and one of these portfolios count for 37% of my grade and I don't understand it. All I know is it is an essay and I have until tomorrow night to get my grade higher or I am in huge trouble and will have to retake the whole class and I already have enough trouble with this stuff. does anyone think they could possibly please help me out.

Answer 1

I know I am horrible. Its just I am so tired I cant hardly focus and tomorrow I wont be home for several hours because I have a doctors appointment and it is out of town and I am freaking out because I cant fail, and because the deadline is so close. My teacher hasn't even helped me no matter how much I have asked for it she wont help me at all figure it all out

Answer 2

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Answer 3

@hawksboy2000 @Danielp @Icewinifredd

Answer 4

@Melissy @mathhelpxx

Answer 5

Im sorry I know I am horrible yall

Answer 6

help me first

Answer 7

deal

Answer 8

anyone that can really help me out on this I will fan and medal, and try my best to help with anything they need help with

Answer 9

@SpongebobGotSwag

Answer 10

Through a presentation and analysis of information drawn from various sources, research writing is used by writers to communicate facts in an unbiased form. Though it can be difficult to keep your own point of view on a subject out of the picture, the goal of a research report is to share information about a subject. More than duplicating what others have reported about a topic, your research paper is an opportunity to interpret the thoughts of others. writer.

For your unit writing project, you will write a research paper in which you compose an analysis of an historical event of your choosing that had a monumental effect on American literature. Throughout the school year, you have prepared for this project through multiple encounters with the writing process and different elements of research.

Read about research writing in Chapter 11 of Writing with Power on p. 390. Write the definition of research writing in your notebook. Read over the list of ways that people use research writing in everyday life. Can you think of two or three additional ways? Why do you think the skills gained through organizing and presenting information in this form are essential inside and outside of the classroom?
Click on the link below to watch the "Researching the Salem Witch Project” Discovery Education™ streaming movie. As you watch, answer the following questions:
1.What is the best way to begin writing a research report?
2.What is the function of the thesis statement?
3.What topic related to the Salem Witch Trials most interests you? What questions might begin a research project about that topic? Write a possible thesis statement for that topic.

Answer 11

What is the basic theme of this?

Answer 12

@hawsboys2000

Answer 13

uhhhhhh what do you mean

Answer 14

What is it suppose to be about?

Answer 15

@hawksboy2000

Answer 16

For your unit writing project, you will write a research paper in which you compose an analysis of an historical event of your choosing that had a monumental effect on American literature.

Answer 17

umm I think I chose 9/11

Answer 18

Alright. Let me see what I can do here.

Answer 19

I have a thesis statement just no essay

Answer 20

Alright 9/11 is an amazing choice.

Answer 21

Alright. So, how much more do you need finished?

Answer 22

That's the bad part :'( the thesis is all I have

Answer 23

What grade and class are you in?

Answer 24

I'm kind of tired. Sorry if I say something confusing. Dx

Answer 25

11 English 3b

Answer 26

Its ok I am too, I haven't slept in 3 days because I have been trying to do this and several other assignments

Answer 27

I have tried looking at things on prezi and it never lets me view anything on there

Answer 28

@Luna1234 is there anything you can do to help me?

Answer 29

Hmm...

Answer 30

I am so sorry :( I feel bad for asking for help with this

Answer 31

It's fine! ^_^

Answer 32

Thank you

Answer 33

What grade are you in?

Answer 34

11

Answer 35

Dang. I'm below your grade. :c

Answer 36

I'm in 8th.

Answer 37

haha I think that anything I can turn in is better than nothing I right on like a 7th or 8th grade level lol I am horrible when it comes to essays

Answer 38

I will still try to help you! c:

Answer 39

Lol.

Answer 40

Thank you so much

Answer 41

Maybe this might help? http://www.paper-research.com/paper/9-11-and-how-it-affected-the-United-States.-136717.html I hope it does. If it doesn't I will keep looking. ;)

Answer 42

^.^

Answer 43

It gave me like 3 sentences and wont let me read anymore

Answer 44

Awh crab cakes! I will continue looking! ^_^

Answer 45

Do you think we could like go through it and write the essay together maybe

Answer 46

Alright. I'm not really experienced with thesis statements though. Since I'm in 8th.

Answer 47

That's ok I already have that part I just need the rest of the intro, the body and the conclusion

Answer 48

That's great! Okay do you mind to put what you have so far. That will give me ideas. xD

Answer 49

ok awesome we have the intro and thesis together :) hmm a little weight was just lifted off my shoulders lol

Answer 50

yup that's the next part, but still also need the conclusion too

Answer 51

ok thank you

Answer 52

No, I'm sorry. I'm in English 10.

Answer 53

Its ok thank you though. SpongebobGotSwag is helping me a ton!

Answer 54

Its ok. hmmm we need to have about 2-3 paragraphs for the body. I think this would be great for the first one. and where it says 3000 died we could take that sentence out and put it in the next paragraph. In that paragraph it could talk about how they died and how it affected and still affects the families of those people. and also mention how many were firemen or police and stuff

Answer 55

Ok I am looking now to see how many were firemen and stuff

Answer 56

Alright!

Answer 57

straight from wiki

Answer 58

Lol. Okay.

Answer 59

@SpongebobGotSwag

Answer 60

yayyy :) :) :) :) :) ...................................................... do you think there should be one more body paragraph that like tells more about the hijacking of the planes or the aftermath of 9/11 like the cleanup or somethin and then a conclusion?

Answer 61

hmm ok im looking

Answer 62

hmm im not finding much of anything but pictures

Answer 63

A lot can change in a just over a decade. America’s involvement in the War on Terror – in reaction to 9/11 – resulted in new attitudes and concerns about defense and vigilance. The change ushered in a series of government policies like the USA Patriot Act that prioritized national security, often at the expense of civil liberties.
Here are three of the many dramatic transformations brought on by the events of 9/11:
More than a decade of war
Long airport lines, full body scans, the occasional pat-down.

Answer 64

here is some info I found Idk what to really put though

Answer 65

http://blogs.kqed.org/lowdown/2012/09/11/911-turns-11-three-major-lasting-changes/

Answer 66

idk do you have any ideas

Answer 67

@SpongebobGotSwag

Answer 68

are you there?

Answer 69

Sorry I was on brb. So, when is your paper due?

Answer 70

tomorrow and its ok

Answer 71

ok

Answer 72

I just want to make sure you pass that class! Lol.

Answer 73

lol ya me too and with this essay I can get two portfolios done and raise my grade. This one counts for like 37% of y final grade I think

Answer 74

Idk I cant thinkof anything else to write :(

Answer 75

@Shashank4488

Answer 76

Hear is my intro, and two body paragraphs

Answer 77

here*

Answer 78

@headge

Answer 79

@leenagorgeous

Answer 80

@desiFaith333
Have you done the English 12 A Unit 6: Semester Exam? Help me with that and I'll help you as much as I can. Also, have you done the semester exams for Secondary Math 3 A &b?

Answer 81

I am sorry I haven't. I am in 11 grade not 12. :( I am sorry

Answer 82

@Mclaren_p1 This is what I have so far on my essay

Answer 83

not bad.....4 such a cutie ;)

Answer 84

haha thanks :P

Answer 85

alright let me get 2 work here.

Answer 86

lol if you can just help me figure out what else to put in the essay then I could write it

Answer 87

do u have a rubric 4 this essay?

Answer 88

just a sec

Answer 89

For your unit writing project, you will write a research paper in which you compose an analysis of an historical event of your choosing that had a monumental effect on American literature.

Answer 90

Through a presentation and analysis of information drawn from various sources, research writing is used by writers to communicate facts in an unbiased form. Though it can be difficult to keep your own point of view on a subject out of the picture, the goal of a research report is to share information about a subject. More than duplicating what others have reported about a topic, your research paper is an opportunity to interpret the thoughts of others. writer.
Read about research writing in Chapter 11 of Writing with Power on p. 390. Write the definition of research writing in your notebook. Read over the list of ways that people use research writing in everyday life. Can you think of two or three additional ways? Why do you think the skills gained through organizing and presenting information in this form are essential inside and outside of the classroom?
Click on the link below to watch the "Researching the Salem Witch Project” Discovery Education™ streaming movie. As you watch, answer the following questions:
1.What is the best way to begin writing a research report?
2.What is the function of the thesis statement?
3.What topic related to the Salem Witch Trials most interests you? What questions might begin a research project about that topic? Write a possible thesis statement for that topic.

Answer 91

Is this what you are lookin for?

Answer 92

@Mclaren_p1

Answer 93

yep