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geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

"Words on a Page"

I write to make my voice heard
To put power behind every word.
Pen to page, things to say;
Change the world in a day. 
I pick my fights with care
Jump walls like they aren't even there.
Pen to page, out of my way
Things to do, I cannot stay.

I write to run, I write to hide,
I write to fight the monsters inside.
Pen to page, I get away
But must again face the day.
Everyday a dangerous fight
Continues when I close my eyes at night.
Pen to page, my strength is new,
With just enough to get me through.

I write because it's what I'm told,
But words on a page is getting old.
Pen to page, what a chore!
Writing has always been a bore.
Words won't come; they never do.
This writer's block is nothing new. 
Pen to page, just get it done,
A root canal would be more fun.

I write because I have to write,
An obsession with no end in sight.
Pen to page, words in my head
Remain unspoken, must be said.
A jumble of words begging to come out.
The power of some whisper, others shout.
Pen to page, words on a page
Stay strong and defy the age.

thadyoung · Answer

Seems good.

hugsnotughs · Answer

I love how the first half of the poem says about loving to write and suddenly...the writer has writer's block and gets frustrated and starts to "hate" writing for that moment.  I love that twist.  Great job on the rhyming and everything. :-)

hugsnotughs · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

My oh my! This poem! I--- I love it!!! You have put my thoughts into your words. I love poems and I also write ! I write poetry and stories and this--- this has described all! This is beautiful! Good job! I love the way it flows. You read one thing then before realizing it, you're reading about how hard it is to write. It's --- amazing! Good job!!!!!! ❤️❤️

seaturtle113 · Answer

I really love the brilliancy of this. It has a wonderful flow to it and the style of writing was simply outstanding. I think that if you could keep practicing, you'll go far. This is much better than most of the poems I've read here. Great work. :) I also love how it says more than it actually says with words.. :)  That's how a poem should be.

anonymous · Answer

I love this!!!!!

anonymous · Answer

Excellent. $\Large \color{blue}{ಥ◡ಥ}$

anonymous · Answer

This is amazing! You are a brilliant poet - love the story and rhyming!

anonymous · Answer

Great poem. I like it.

anonymous · Answer

good poem but it is a little off but besides  that it is great

anonymous · Answer

I love it!! Very well written.

quickstudent · Answer

That poem's great!!! I love it! really shows the feelings of a poet at different times, at the same time it shows more than what is written:)  Great Job!

anonymous · Answer

This is my all-time favorite poem on Earth! I love the twist, and how you keep opening with "pen to page", and also just the entire meaning of the poem. Seriously my favorite- writing is a bit of a bore, but a forced bore!