Question

I'd appreciate some feedback on a love poem I wrote some months ago, if you don't mind. You should go right into reading the first stanza after you've click the link because the music will start playing by the time you begin reading the fifth line. I'm thinking about making this a spoken word. ♥ make sure your volume isn't off c:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/xoxblasianxox/1307849/

Answer 1

excellent... it's an outstanding one.... really nice effort... i love this...

Answer 2

Much appreciated c:

Answer 3

it sounds fantastic!

Answer 4

GAH BEAUTIFUL !

Answer 5

@olivia.smiles @ilovchuu thank you both so much

Answer 6

Its amazing(:

Answer 7

Wow, very well done.

Answer 8

@AustinTyler and @musicmakeslife I really do appreciate your comments, thank you c:

Answer 9

I love the rhythm. A B A B A B.. It's quite nice indeed. You have quite a talent.

Answer 10

@lauraisloved Thank you...it's the first love poem I've ever written. I suppose the end result is due to an inspiration lol usually I'd be terrible in this particular territory.

Answer 11

very nice :)

Answer 12

@Gravity_Dreams lol thank you

Answer 13

I can practically FEEL the love! That's amazing. You're a great writer!

Answer 14

@emilyocs713 thank you, I'm glad. If I can't feel the feeling that I felt when I wrote something every time I read it then I usually end up throwing it out.

Answer 15

I love it.

Answer 16

@Lena772 glad to hear

Answer 17

i don't really get poetry especially english

Answer 18

@Usman1995 what do you mean

Answer 19

very good

Answer 20

@AndrewKaiser333 thank you

Answer 21

That's awesome!

Answer 22

@jcpd910 arigatou domo xD

Answer 23

Indeedly. I started a clan:
Do More (DOMO)
Wanna join? :D

Answer 24

Beautiful. :)

Answer 25

@Samsonite16 appreciate it ♥ and gomen'nasai @jcpd910 demo watashi wa am a lonewolf lol /.\