Question

Check my work?

Answer 1

For the assignment, I needed a thesis statement, bridging sentence, and hook. Does this look good?

MY THESIS STATEMENT:

NUCLEAR DISARMAMENT IS A HUMAN RIGHTS ISSUE WHICH AFFECTS MANY COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD, INCLUDING THE UNITED STATED AND JAPAN, AND SHOULDN'T BE TAKEN SO LIGHTLY!

MY INTRODUCTION:

NUCLEAR WEAPONS HAVE INJURED AND KILLED THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD, AND YET, THEY STILL EXIST IN OUR WORLD TODAY... WE, AS PEOPLE, HAVE THE CHOICE TO USE OUR VOICES TO PROTEST, TO DEMAND A BAN ON THESE WEAPONS, AND YET, WE CHOOSE NOT TO... WE, AS PEOPLE, CAN PROVE HOW IMPORTANT NUCLEAR DISARMAMENT IS, FOR THE SAKE OF A NUCLEAR-WEAPON-FREE WORLD, FOR THE SAKE OF OTHERS, AND FOR THE SAKE OF OURSELVES, BUT WE CHOOSE TO SIMPLY DO NOTHING...TO SAY NOTHING... IT'S TIME FOR US TO STAND TOGETHER, AS ONE, TO PUT THESE WEAPONS TO AN END, TO ABOLISH THEM FOR GOOD, AND TO RAISE AWARENESS OF NUCLEAR DISARMAMENT! NUCLEAR DISARMAMENT IS A HUMAN RIGHTS ISSUE WHICH AFFECTS MANY COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD, INCLUDING THE UNITED STATED AND JAPAN, AND SHOULDN'T BE TAKEN SO LIGHTLY!

Sorry for the caps >.>

Answer 2

I say you did well for the introduction.

Answer 3

@Anonymous_101_ Thank you! :D Do my thesis statement, bridging statement, and hook look good? And are they noticeable? :)

Answer 4

@cocacola2 They all looked good to me and they stand out.

Answer 5

@Anonymous_101_ Thanks a super bunch!!! :D

Answer 6

No problem