Question

I wrote a poem! I would love some feed back. It's on wattpad and is copywrited. Let me know what you think

Answer 1

http://www.wattpad.com/52136172-dreaming-me

Answer 2

There are more poems on Wattpad! My username is PositivelyDyslexic

Answer 3

Beautiful!

Answer 4

some grammar mistakes
but its good

Answer 5

@aajugdar thats the beauty about poetry grammer doesnt have to have grammer it just has to make since.

thank you to both of you for your comments

Answer 6

well well
there /their makes difference sweety ^^

Answer 7

@aajugdar dude i wasnt trying to be mean and I believe it or not do some thigs like there and there on purpose. Every single one of my poems has a grammatical error. Reason being im expressing myself and part of me is dyslexic actually a big part of me is dyslexic along with several other disabilities. I put things like that in my poetry to show that its a part of me. It's how i accept myself. If i cant be fully honest with myself through poetry then i cant be honest with myself at all. I didnt mean it rudely i was just making a statment. I really do appreciate your feed back but i did have a reason so thanks

Answer 8

oh hey calm down
you wanted feedback,i gave you one.
i didnt say it is bad or anything ^^

Answer 9

Again i wasnt being mean i am calm i was just telling you my reasoning and i thank you for the feed back honestly

Answer 10

@aajugdar

Answer 11

well

Answer 12

I feel that You are a deep person. Do not worry about what others think about you. If you are happy with yourself so will those who care about you.