What is the best way to correct the parallelism in this sentence? She had a lovely house, many friends, and her body of work was impressive.
A. She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive.
B. Her house was lovely, and she had many friends and an impressive body of work.
C. She had a lovely house, where she entertained many friends and where her impressive body of work was created.
D. She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.

Question

What is the best way to correct the parallelism in this sentence? She had a lovely house, many friends, and her body of work was impressive.
  A. She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive. 	
  B. Her house was lovely, and she had many friends and an impressive body of work. 	
  C. She had a lovely house, where she entertained many friends and where her impressive body of work was created. 	
  D. She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.

anonymous · Answer

It would be D. It couldn't be A because only the body of work was impressive, not the rest. It wouldn't be B because there should be no 'and' after the comma and it wouldn't be C 'cause they don't say 'entertained' or where the body of work was created in the initial sentence.