Question

Okay, well this is more of a writing question, but I really want some opinions WILL FAN AND MEDAL

Answer 1

The worst feeling is not knowing what to do or how to feel at all... Not knowing whether to be angry, or hurt... happy or sad.... to laugh or to cry... to stay calm or be b1tchy... to ask or to just leave it alone
But my question is: how can I leave it alone when the evidence is right there?
How can you tell me its nothing when i saw what i saw?
How can you be in "love" with two people?
Why would you call it love when you knew that it wasn't?
If it wasn't love then tell me, what was it?
Yeah, you hearin me but you ain't feelin me tho
It wasn't love.... or... or... adoration... or... or... infatuation...
It was lust, which is nothing...
And if it was nothing, then i guess we're nothing...

Answer 2

(Its like a spoken word or somethin... idk)

Answer 3

what the question?

Answer 4

good

Answer 5

if this is a poem you deserve an A+

Answer 6

I like it. I believe you did a good job at showing the mistakes on one side and how it conflicts with you. DO you have anything specific you'd like to know about it though?

Answer 7

i know right

Answer 8

Not, really, i just like to write an no one was responding when i was posting in the writing thread

Answer 9

did you write it?
or....are you trying to understand it

Answer 10

yea its pretty inactive over there

Answer 11

Ii wrote it

Answer 12

I believe you did a good job on it though.

Answer 13

Thanks :)

Answer 14

no problem :)

Answer 15

its excellent lol

Answer 16

Thanks :)

Answer 17

I think its good. Just don't use so much ellipsis.