Question

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

"Is everyone here ready to play?" asked Coach Starks.
"Ready!" shouted the players.
"You bet we are!" said Trent.
Coach Starks said, "Let's jog a lap and then stretch. Can someone grab the water bottles?"
"Sure," said Colin. "I've got the medical kit," offered Marcus.
"Try to stay focused, boys!" urged Coach Starks.

A.
incorrectly

B.
correctly

Answer 1

Incorrectly.

Answer 2

There are several errors within this dialogue.

Answer 3

Where?

Answer 4

I'll explain in a diagram.. gimme a second to draw it all out. (:

Answer 5

Ok

Answer 6

Waiting face