I wrote this poem, please tell me if it's good:
Death I welcome thee,
Come and take what is left of me.
I'm not worth anymore breath,
I only deserve the coming of death.
Stone me, put me in the fire,
For I am just a liar.
Let me lay there and rest,
I am far from best.
I summon death to conceal me,
To take me and kill thee.

There will be no witness,
Just you and I.
In a chamber,
In a chamber so I may die.

THANK YOU! :)

Question

I wrote this poem, please tell me if it's good:
Death I welcome thee,
Come and take what is left of me.
I'm not worth anymore breath,
I only deserve the coming of death.
Stone me, put me in the fire,
For I am just a liar.
Let me lay there and rest,
I am far from best.
I summon death to conceal me,
To take me and kill thee.

There will be no witness,
Just you and I.
In a chamber,
In a chamber so I may die.

THANK YOU! :)

anonymous · Answer

Why write about death? It is very good but why?

anonymous · Answer

It was a school assignment a few years back

anonymous · Answer

it is very good