Question

I wrote it 4 years ago, on my mom's b'day..!

Answer 1

Oh! Ma! Oh! Mother,
You are the image of God landed on Earth,
who can capture your real worth ?

Your tender mind, and love filled heart,
I am proud of being your part...

For me, you surely did take pains..
And only, cos of that your blood and milk is today flowing in my veins...

You shout at me, you slap me...
When-so-ever am wrong,
But I know, it's for my benefit
And you are only making me strong..

I sometimes revolt for no reason!
Especially when you do not take us somewhere, in the summer season!
Understanding our situation,
You take us for vacation !

Mommy It's you!
It's you the greatest of great..!
You taught me importance of time,
and cos of that for important things I was never late...

In the summer,when after school, I go home,
It's you waiting under the sun,
for your daughters, to school who had gone!

And in the winters, it's your daughters...
Running out at the door,
Waiting for the clock to click 5 o'clock...

The door bell rings, and you get out of the car...
You give us our candies and we both start our war!

After a few minutes that ends...
When one of us, to other, the candies does lend!

Well, it's always me, who does compromise
and therefore, you always have one spare piece for me,
as a surprise...!
This all glitters my eyes..!
And to hide this from my sister,
we both speak thousands of lies..!

Sometimes are relationship is super sweet
and sometimes super sour..!
But whatever it is...
The time I want to spend with you...
Than last time, should always be more...!

I'm glad to have a mother like you..
Who is more alike my friend...

Answer 2

awwwe

Answer 3

wow! its so true...
@gudden - great work! :-)

Answer 4

awww gudden loved it <3

Answer 5

ur mom is lucky to have u

Answer 6

Thanks... ^_^

Answer 7

How's it... @aajugdar ?

Answer 8

this is awesomee
i wish i could write poems
poets have amazing imaginations

Answer 9

LOL.. not at all imagination..XD
It's all about my mom , me and my sister...:)

Answer 10

but to write it in form of poem <3
needs talent ^^

Answer 11

Thanks...:)

Answer 12

my pleasure (:

Answer 13

that's amazing @gudden

Answer 14

Thank you ^_^

Answer 15

@shereenkhan ... it's in here..:)

Answer 16

wow, awesome :)
it's so good. i like that.
i love it @ gudden.

Answer 17

Thank you...^_^

Answer 18

np :)