Question

I've been waiting for you.
Today's your last day.
Do what you must.
I won't stop you.
Just remember I always loved you.
So don't do anything you'll regret.
Spend time with the people and things that make you happy.
Then say your final goodbyes.
You really think they'll miss you they have their own lives.
They won't care where you are or where you're going after today.
After today they won't even remember your own name.
Goodbye :)

Answer 1

so what do yall think

Answer 2

I think it's nice :D

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

Why "your own name" instead of "your name"?

Answer 5

idk its just the way i wrote it

Answer 6

maby i wanted to emphisize it

Answer 7

live is so full of obsticals and here in this poem you have expresses the mental side of how one little thing will show how others will look opon you. great job @kittycat123

Answer 8

thx