I need to know if this is a good thesis for an assignment I have prompt question: Is advertising to teens effective and ethical? My Thesis: Advertising to teens is more effective than ethical because of the use of pathos, they make teens buy things they don't need, and toward ethical come up with a problem and use a product to solve the problem.

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I need to know if this is a good thesis for an assignment I have                                                                 prompt question: Is advertising to teens effective and ethical?                                                                           My Thesis: Advertising to teens is more effective than ethical because of the use of pathos, they make teens buy things they don't need, and toward ethical come up with a problem and use a product to solve the problem.

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anonymous · Answer

Is that picture suppose to be a good or bad sign

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hahah i'm reading it to again n again

anonymous · Answer

it seems mostly to the point

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but is there a way to make it better

anonymous · Answer

explain a lil more

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Does it flow good enough to turn into an essay I have to write later

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|dw:1404578132910:dw| effective starting :)

anonymous · Answer

thank you so this thesis is actually good

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yes

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Thanks for your response know I feel more confident in writing it and turning it in

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