Question

Re-done. Final version. Not adding/re-doing. Already ran through copyright office as it is. Enjoy.

Answer 1

Are you getting a weird rattle in the background?

Answer 2

Like the strings vibrating?

Answer 3

I'll listen in a few minutes. Hold on.

Answer 4

I enjoyed it, from every revision you've done up to this point lol. Good job man. For some reason, I always feel like the ending seems disconnected from the rest of the piece. ;-; It's weird.

Answer 5

It is lol. I don't know how "explain" it in a sensible way. It's like writing someone a letter and how knowing how to conclude it.

Answer 6

Lmaoo, exactly.