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OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

What is the best piece of writing you have ever wrote?

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

A poem By Dbzfan836 Every single day, I just stare; I just stare straight into despair; Because Darkness is in my way; It’s in my way, every single day. The Darkness keeps making a little hole; A little hole in my heart and soul; In order to complete its dark goal; To follow the role of a dark soul.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I think your poem is \(\normalsize\cal\color{purple}{beautiful}\)!

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

thanks!

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

@dumbsearch2

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

remove your reply if dont want any more messages on it

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

@anonymous_user @AngelWilliams16 @artofspeed @AuroraB

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I have a poem, if you'd like me to post it. (:

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

if you wish

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

In a land of \(\normalsize\cal\color{teal}w\color{teal}a\color{teal}t\color{teal}e\color{teal}r\color{teal}f\color{teal}a\color{teal}l\color{teal}l\color{teal}s\), We have \(\normalsize\bf\color{red}n\color{red}o\) boundary walls. In a land where only beauty resides, To you, the \(\normalsize\bf\color{greenyellow}p\color{greenyellow}e\color{greenyellow}a\color{greenyellow}c\color{greenyellow}e\) and \(\normalsize\bf\color{cyan}c\color{cyan}a\color{cyan}l\color{cyan}m\color{cyan}n\color{cyan}e\color{cyan}s\color{cyan}s\) guides. As you walk upon the crystal beach, A state of \(\normalsize\bf\color{cyan}t\color{cyan}r\color{cyan}a\color{cyan}n\color{cyan}q\color{cyan}i\color{cyan}l\color{cyan}i\color{cyan}t\color{cyan}y\), you reach. As our \(\normalsize\bf\color{gold}g\color{gold}o\color{gold}l\color{gold}d\color{gold}e\color{gold}n\) sun declines, We adventure into the crystal mines. Beauty within these caverns catches our eye, A beauty that will \(\normalsize\bf\color{red}n\color{red}e\color{red}v\color{red}e\color{red}r\) die. Into this breathtaking \(\normalsize\bf\color{blueviolet}n\color{blueviolet}i\color{blueviolet}g\color{blueviolet}h\color{blueviolet}t\), We see a gorgeous, otherworldly sight. Shades of \(\normalsize\bf\color{purple}p\color{purple}u\color{purple}r\color{purple}p\color{purple}l\color{purple}e\color{purple}s\), \(\normalsize\bf\color{blue}b\color{blue}l\color{blue}u\color{blue}e\color{blue}s\), and \(\normalsize\bf\color{lightgrey}w\color{lightgrey}h\color{lightgrey}i\color{lightgrey}t\color{lightgrey}e\)... These are this world’s \(\normalsize\bf\color{orange}E\color{orange}t\color{orange}h\color{orange}e\color{orange}r\color{orange}e\color{orange}a\color{orange}l\) \(\normalsize\bf\color{yellow}L\color{yellow}i\color{yellow}g\color{yellow}h\color{yellow}t\). The voices of the people singing awe-inspiring melodies, From \(\normalsize\bf\color{teal}s\color{teal}a\color{teal}d\color{teal}n\color{teal}e\color{teal}s\color{teal}s\) and \(\normalsize\bf\color{maroon}p\color{maroon}a\color{maroon}i\color{maroon}n\), these songs are the \(\normalsize\bf\color{lime}r\color{lime}e\color{lime}m\color{lime}e\color{lime}d\color{lime}i\color{lime}e\color{lime}s\). Though this may describe the perfect dream, And impossible, it may seem… This is \(\normalsize\bf\color{orange}E\color{orange}u\color{orange}h\color{orange}x\color{orange}y\color{orange}a\color{orange}h\color{orange}n\color{orange}ë\color{orange}l\color{orange}i\color{orange}e\), a world ever so miraculous and breathtaking… A world of only \(\normalsize\bf\color{cyan}c\color{cyan}a\color{cyan}l\color{cyan}m\color{cyan}n\color{cyan}e\color{cyan}s\color{cyan}s\), \(\normalsize\bf\color{purple}h\color{purple}o\color{purple}n\color{purple}e\color{purple}s\color{purple}t\color{purple}y\), and \(\normalsize\bf\color{greenyellow}p\color{greenyellow}e\color{greenyellow}a\color{greenyellow}c\color{greenyellow}e\). A world where beauty and happiness never \(\normalsize\bf\color{maroon}n\color{maroon}e\color{maroon}v\color{maroon}e\color{maroon}r\) cease. Welcome to \(\normalsize\bf\color{orange}E\color{orange}u\color{orange}h\color{orange}x\color{orange}y\color{orange}a\color{orange}h\color{orange}n\color{orange}ë\color{orange}l\color{orange}i\color{orange}e\), my world creation… It is an infinite land of happiness and imagination. Create wondrous beauties of your own design, And to pain \(\normalsize\bf\color{maroon}p\color{maroon}a\color{maroon}i\color{maroon}n\), you’ll \(\normalsize\bf\color{red}n\color{red}e\color{red}v\color{red}e\color{red}r\) again have to resign. Though the land is one of imagination, It is \(\normalsize\bf\color{lime}r\color{lime}e\color{lime}a\color{lime}l\) through our thoughts relation… Euhxyahnëlie could be Earth, if we’d \(\normalsize\bf\color{red}s\color{red}t\color{red}o\color{red}p\) hating each other, If we love \(\normalsize\bf\color{lime}l\color{lime}o\color{lime}v\color{lime}e\) and \(\normalsize\bf\color{magenta}h\color{magenta}e\color{magenta}l\color{magenta}p\) one another… Be peaceable \(\normalsize\bf\color{green}p\color{green}e\color{green}a\color{green}c\color{green}e\color{green}a\color{green}b\color{green}l\color{green}e\) with the land, all others, and within ourselves have inner peace, The reality of \(\normalsize\bf\color{orange}E\color{orange}u\color{orange}h\color{orange}x\color{orange}y\color{orange}a\color{orange}h\color{orange}n\color{orange}ë\color{orange}l\color{orange}i\color{orange}e\), we’ll \(\normalsize\bf\color{greenyellow}r\color{greenyellow}e\color{greenyellow}l\color{greenyellow}e\color{greenyellow}a\color{greenyellow}s\color{greenyellow}e\), And our \(\normalsize\bf\color{greenyellow}h\color{greenyellow}a\color{greenyellow}p\color{greenyellow}p\color{greenyellow}i\color{greenyellow}n\color{greenyellow}e\color{greenyellow}s\color{greenyellow}s\) and \(\normalsize\bf\color{magenta}l\color{magenta}o\color{magenta}v\color{magenta}e\) will \(\normalsize\bf\color{red}n\color{red}e\color{red}v\color{red}e\color{red}r\) cease. ~Written by: .:.Sairalindë Silîmaurë.:. ♕ Empress of Euhxyahnëlie ♕

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Thats so good, I sceenshot it to keep readin later [;

OpenStudy (aurorab):

Wow guys those are really good! <33 and @Whitemonsterbunny17 you have me in awe

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

thanks

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

@Dbzfan836 i liked urs from the last post @Whitemonsterbunny17 i read ur peom before its soooo amazing !

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

\(\large\cal\color{purple}{Thanks!}\) @AuroraB @Dbzfan836 @ikram002p (:

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

@ikram002p , any other writing to share?

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

the best thing i wrote , its not in english its in my native language i wrote peoms /story i used to have part time jop in a magazine last semister but im still learning how to write in english

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

well i have few in english but not that good , too many errors needs to edit

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

well, you definetly made progress, unlike me. Im practicing arabic, worlds hardest language

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

ohh i write in arabic :O

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

i can teach u if you want to !

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

wow, thats awesome [:

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

but no thanks

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

huh ok :P

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Im just doing it as practice, Just to understand it

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Im doin good, but not good enough

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

I might as well write a poem on this

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

ohh good luck then :3

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

i'll post one of mine

OpenStudy (aurorab):

I have poems but they aren't in any special or fancy language...

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

i would like to read from u guys ^^ to learn what ever u have

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

@AuroraB you should post one. (:

OpenStudy (aurorab):

it's uh kinda deep. and i guess not appropriate for children 13 or younger but yeahh i will

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Another poem By Dbzfan836 I try, I try; I’d like to lie That I can’t understand Almost every letter, man I don’t know Arabic I try everyday Then go to pray; But don’t know what I’m sayin; I don’t know Arabic

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Thats what I have in my head

OpenStudy (aurorab):

ha it's short and sweet, I like it!

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

thanks!

OpenStudy (aurorab):

your welcome! i'll post the shortest one i have saved on my computer!

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

ok, sure

OpenStudy (aurorab):

When all else fails I know I can look to you. As weird as this relationship may be... I'll love you for infinity You are my forever and we can go beyond the stars I know the distance hurts I feel it too. But in the end it will lead me back to you. If I could send you anything I would. My kisses and raindrops? My hugs as oceans? Love... If it was a person, I'd send you me. Life and love is a gamble... I put all my poker chips on you. Don't let this be a waste or I'll have nothing else to live for. Let me be your infinite love Keep me burning like a flame.

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

@Dbzfan836 lolznice one ,simple i like it

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

@AuroraB i like it sooo much ! i would like ti read more from u

OpenStudy (aurorab):

thanks! and most of mine are long and sometimes don't make since i have afew more on my profile like the questions I've asked...

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

A third poem By Dbzfan836 I lay in bed; I try to sleep; I just can’t; I keep thinkin about me; Think about my day; Think about my night; Think about a nap; Think about Minecraft; Get outta bed; Get my candle read; Get to the Laptop; Play like a boss wop; Play all night; Play all day; Just for fun and Games.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I love it!! @AuroraB So much emotion... \(\normalsize\cal\color{magenta}{Amazing!~\heartsuit}\)

OpenStudy (aurorab):

thank ya and @Dbzfan836 very catchy!!

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

thanks

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

I just wrote it

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

@Dbzfan836 you are a very talented writer!! I love the game references, too! *^o^*

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

@Dbzfan836 it could be a nice song

OpenStudy (aurorab):

Really? I can't write that fast...

OpenStudy (aurorab):

nooo not the typing. My thoughts about poetry don't flow together so quickly... i can think of maybe one or two lines and then i gotta REALLY think hard about the rest.

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

oh, I see. think off all the lines first, then begin writing. think about structure, lines, and speed before you write a single letter pro tip ^^^

OpenStudy (aurorab):

aha nice to know!

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

hmm, you guys got anything else?

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

mmm i have xD humble diary lol

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

post it, please

OpenStudy (aurorab):

oh yeah i got lots more! like almost 300 but they r long

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

is it dream or imagination or what im seeing is true , its been through me , and change my mind within a minute what is happening to me ? what is happening to me ? why the life become so sweet to me ? what is happening to me ? what is happening to me ? im seeing the world more sweet in his eyes once I found the light surrounds me in my life i attached to it and forget what have been gone in my life

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

i think this is the only part that i can post here lol

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Thats really nice, @ikram002p . heres mine

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

A fourth poem By Dbzfan836 My life hurts, From losing my perch, Into my kitty paws, Because I break physic laws. I can only land on my feet, It makes me feel unique, Below my kitty paws, Because I break physic laws. I have sharp claws, Which help clean my jaws, Inside my kitty paws, Because I break Physic laws.

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

i loved this one the most lol

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

thank you @ikram002p

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Right now, I'll probably make a Why not zoidberg poem

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

That is such a cute poem!! \(\large\color{magenta}\heartsuit\) @Dbzfan836

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

ok what about this (not peom ) a little of loneliness and more of empty , a lot of emotion and little pieces i have from you this is how my night goes the day you left me it's full of darkness , coldness , memories waiting you to feel for me it doesn't matter how much i cried and wailed as long as i will get used to it it become a part of my soul ... my broken soul. when i think of you i feel weak , you've got a victory ,but me huh still waiting like a dry tree longing for rain. I'm mad ... i never know how to be a hypocrite , but now im sure , its simple , its easy i've been living two lifes and there exist two of me .. i dont dare to make them match how is that while all of our world is full of struggle and divisive

OpenStudy (aurorab):

That was adorable!! xD @Dbzfan836

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Now thats what I call A nice Storyline

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

^^ this is similar to how i write in arabic

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

*o* \(\large\cal\color{magenta}{AMAZING!~\heartsuit}\) @ikram002p

OpenStudy (aurorab):

*jaw drops* i'm speechless

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

thank you guys u all are awesome ^_^

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Scars Through the pain of each torn memory, Through the pain of each wound, we bleed. Through the pain causing the fall of each tear we cry, Through the pain, we still haven’t died. Through the pain, we fight, Through the pain, we still don’t lose sight. Through the pain, we live our lives, Through the pain, we survive. These scars, from faded memories, These scars prove how strong we have been. These scars, like dark valleys, invade our skin… These scars symbolize that dark secrets lie within. These scars tell our stories, These scars inscribe what we’ve survived through. These scars prove that we are strong, These scars prove that we can move on. ~Written by: .:.Sairalindë Silîmaurë.:. ♕ Empress of Euhxyahnëlie ♕

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

no, @ikram002p , you're awesome

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

A fifth poem By Dbzfan836 My life is a struggle, One to be heard, Ya know why? ‘Cause why not Zoidberg? I’m stuck on the streets, Where nobody meets, And Where I keep: ‘Just why not Zoidberg?’ Then there was a day, That memes were made, So then I say, ‘Why not Zoidberg?’

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

finished that exactly at 7:33 Pm today

OpenStudy (aurorab):

woah you guys!

OpenStudy (aurorab):

When you’re surrounded by people, but feel as though you have no one. When you’re so close to all those people, Where as they don’t know the slightest thing about you. When everyone smiles because they think you’re smiling, the only reason you’re smiling is so that they smile. The only reason you fake that smile is so people stop questioning, stop trying to dig deeper. Deep down, you can’t understand your own self. So why should anyone else try for a second to understand you?

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

I dunno

OpenStudy (aurorab):

no like woah you guys are to good! like you should publish that some where theres a website called teen ink and if you win with your writing you can publish your writing in their magazines I've been trying for so long... but they don't like my stuff. So...

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

hmm. I'll try it

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

wow that was so amazing ! @Whitemonsterbunny17 @Dbzfan836 @AuroraB amazing ppl ! and i guess this is my favourite post ever !

OpenStudy (aurorab):

and @Dbzfan836 with how fast you come up with your writing and it flows the judges will like fall in love with you!

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

\(\normalsize\cal\color{cyan}{Thanks!~\heartsuit}\) @AuroraB @ikram002p And @AuroraB I don't see why they wouldn't like your writing.. It's amazing!! *o*

OpenStudy (aurorab):

they said my writing needs to be more focused.

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

@AuroraB i write in a magazine in arabic mmm im enjoying it also idk why thos ppl ur talking about dnt accept what u write :O

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

I signed up

OpenStudy (aurorab):

coolio good luck!!

OpenStudy (aurorab):

something I just wrote like right now.... : All these thoughts and feelings, they hinder you. All the tears you cry are full of questions, which no one can answer for you. And you don’t want to find the answer to them because you’re fed up!

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

*o* \(\large\cal\color{gold}{WOW!}\) @AuroraB \(\large\cal\color{magenta}{Stunning!}\)

OpenStudy (aurorab):

Why thank ya!! :3 welp lovelies I enjoyed sharing and reading ya'lls writing. At this time I have to go so sleep tight and sweet dreams!

OpenStudy (ikram002p):

good night ^^

OpenStudy (dbzfan836):

Just submitted a poem to teenink

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

\(\large\cal\color{purple}{Night!!~\heartsuit}\) @AuroraB

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