Question

my life is over
i thought he was mine forever
love stinks and so does life
because its all full of lies
this life you should never trust
because it al going to go up ina big cloud of dust
love stinks and so does life
cuz its all full of lies

this is so true.
@dan815 @camerondoherty @backwoods15 @sahrya @adrynicoleb @tester97 @katie234 @Wolfboy

Answer 1

Did you write this?

Answer 2

yes

Answer 3

nice poem even though it doesnt rhyme

Answer 4

you need help

Answer 5

Well here is a tip, use full words. Also, have more complex explanation of feelings

Answer 6

ikr backwoods

Answer 7

Dont abbreviate , it takes away meaning.

Answer 8

Punctuation and Capitalization is very important

Answer 9

lol try taking some meds they help!

Answer 10

*are

Answer 11

i do

Answer 12

Try not to use pre-language like "Stinks"

Answer 13

have them give you a bigger fluttering dose

Answer 14

wait, you were here for critique on your poem right?

Answer 15

Or for attention?

Answer 16

Or for both?

Answer 17

you know what no i am not going to let you ppl tell me what to do i am my own person and i deserve to be treated like one

Answer 18

FOR ATTENTION

Answer 19

Then why did you post this?

Answer 20

ikr!

Answer 21

*gives wolfboy medal* I am the detective

Answer 22

*gave backwood medal*

Answer 23

ok fork all of yall
bye

Answer 24

thank you!

Answer 25

bye!

Answer 26

i g2g too

Answer 27

noooo^

Answer 28

noooo^

Answer 29

xD lolololol

Answer 30

delete this question plz

Answer 31

Saxon i willll write you a poem okay!!

Answer 32

? that canont be done.

Answer 33

Let me write a poem.

Hi;
Bye.

Answer 34

lmaoi great!!!

Answer 35

okay i will seriously write this poem tho!! saxon!! wait :)

Answer 36

Notice the punctuation and grammar

Answer 37

Hello,
I see this is mellow;
Not to be melancholy.
But a mood of yellow
SHWEG.

Answer 38

@everyone that was the pest poem evar ^

Answer 39

@yanee this is how you make me feel

Answer 40

@yanee

Answer 41

i wish i where dead i messed up big time

Answer 42

This thread.

Answer 43

i am such a forking idiot

Answer 44

I prefer Spoon =P

Answer 45

Lol